Can someone please take a look on my paper :) ?

[DiamantenFee.]

I have to write some newspaper- article about a book we read in school and I am not sure about some phrases I used and the tense, so I hope their is someone who can take a look on it and show me my mistakes. Thank you very much for your time!

Mystery has been lifted
The body's the police have found this morning really belong to J, P and R. Behind their death is a heartbreaking scenario. F L told the police the whole story. The young R fall in love with C daughter J on this annual party at C's estate. Their married in secret, but after R was banished and J was forced to married P, she faked her own death. R was left in the dark about J's plan. When he found out that J is dead, he came to her grave with the plan to kill himself, because he could not life without her. At this point he met P and because of all that mess he killed the man. Afterwards he poised himself at J's grave. But the tragic of this story is, that J woke up, saw her dead husband and killed herself with R's dagger. The most of this points you were able to read in detail some days ago in this newspaper, but who had known that everything would turn out to be so dramatic!? The only good thing about this is, that the feuding families agreed to end their long-reigning feud and we hope this is the beginning for a long-reigning peace. Furthermore the families agreed to place golden status of J & Rside by side in the lovely garden of V.

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

I have to write a newspaper- article about a book we read in school and I am not sure about some phrases I used and the tenses, so I hope there might be somebody around who can take a look at it and show me my mistakes. Thank you very much for your time!

Na, dann wollen wir mal sehen!
Mystery has been lifted
The bodiesfound bythe police this morning have indeed turned out to be J, P and R.A heartbreaking story appears to liebehind their deaths, as F L revealed to the police.

The young R fell in love with C's daughter J on the annual party at C's estate. The young people got married in secret, but after R had been banished and J was to be forced to marry P, she faked her own death. R was left in the dark about J's plan. When he found out that J was dead, he came to her grave intending to kill himself, because he could not live without her. At this point, he met P and because of all the mess (besser: problems and misunderstandings) he killed him. Afterwards he poisoned himself at J's grave. But the tragedy of the story lies in the fact that on waking up J saw her dead husband and killed herself with R's dagger. Though a number of the hard facts were revealed by our correspondentsome days ago, who could have believed that everything would turn out to be so dramatic!?
The only good thing about the tragedy is that the feuding families have agreed to end their long-reigning feud and we hope this is the beginning of a long-reigning peace. Furthermore, the families have agreed to erect golden statues of J & R - side by side in the lovely garden of V.

Grüße
Duckduck

[DiamantenFee.]

Ein großes Dankeschön an dich!