Marketingtext -> Bitte um Verbesserung/Korrektur

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redlion88

Marketingtext -> Bitte um Verbesserung/Korrektur

Beitrag von redlion88 »

Hallo!

Da ich bald meine Prüfung schreibe und wir sehr wahrscheinlich zwei Fragen beatworten müssen + englischer Text ins Deutsche, habe ich nun angefangen das durchgenommene Thema Marketing zu lernen.

Die Prüfung würde dann so aussehen, dass wir eine Frage bekommen. Diese würde, passend zu meinem geschriebenen Text, so lauten: "Was sind die 4 P's?? Beschreibe diese in einem Text."

Und darauf mein Text, der von euch in allen möglichen Variationen korrigiert werden soll :wink: (Ich bin schlecht in Englisch, mal so nebenbei angemerkt :lol:)

Text:

The four P's are the importaint instruments about the marketing politics. It's subdivides in product politic, price politic, placement politic and promontion politic. The aim of all the 4 P's is to meet costumers needs and desires of them. The cooperation of these marketing point's are very importaint for a company. The price, distribution and advertising structures must be planned hand in hand, if you would like to make a good product politic. The most importaint point of the product politic is the definition of the price how is acceptable for costumers. The fixing of price level must be depented in production and on the product itself. The sticking point is that the product must be fullfill costumer needs, boost sales and should be so low in price that supply and demand are balanced. And this is also a task of the price politic. The price politic is concered with the finance matters and sets prices fixed for the offered products. Also they leads in costumers terms of payment. Advertising, puplic relations, events, sponsoring and so on are typical for the promotion politic. It's all about how to call attention and among which average you can argumented to buy a product.At last we have the place politic. In this point you have to look for a good way or place to sell products. This raises the question if sell your product, for example, in the internet or in a big city. If you want to sell your product in a big city you must look for the best place in town and which product you want to sell. For example, it is better when you want to sell clothes, that you search for a place where a lot of people, in a pedertrain zone. In summery, i would describe these four areas. Of course, many factors contribute further in all the four points at the best possible marketing concept.


Könnt ihr mir vielleicht auch ein paar Tipps geben, wie ich am besten enlische Texte ins Deutsche oder aber wie oben beschriebene Texte verfasse? Das geht mir überhaupt nicht leicht von der Hand....
Und was mir beim Tippen eben aufgefallen ist, ist die Groß- und Kleinschreibung!? Wie war das nochmal im Englischen, alles klein??? Könnt ihr mir helfen?? :spin:



VIELEN DANK

Billie

Re: Marketingtext -> Bitte um Verbesserung/Korrektur

Beitrag von Billie »

redlion88 hat geschrieben:Hallo!

Da ich bald meine Prüfung schreibe und wir sehr wahrscheinlich zwei Fragen beatworten müssen + englischer Text ins Deutsche, habe ich nun angefangen das durchgenommene Thema Marketing zu lernen.

Die Prüfung würde dann so aussehen, dass wir eine Frage bekommen. Diese würde, passend zu meinem geschriebenen Text, so lauten: "Was sind die 4 P's?? Beschreibe diese in einem Text."

Und darauf mein Text, der von euch in allen möglichen Variationen korrigiert werden soll :wink: (Ich bin schlecht in Englisch, mal so nebenbei angemerkt :lol:)

Text:

The four P's are the importaint /important instruments about the marketing politics /policies. It's subdivides / It is subdivided  in product politic/

policy, price politic, placement politic and promontion politic. The aim of all the 4 P's is to meet costumers needs and desires (of them). The

cooperation (do you mean coordination?) of these marketing point's are/is very importaint for a company. The price, distribution and advertising

structures must be planned hand in hand, if you would like to / want to make a good product politic./ ... in order to obtain a suitable product

policy.
The most importaint point of the product politic is the definition of the price how is/... price that should be acceptable for costumers. The

fixing of price level must be depented in production and on the product itself / Price generating depends on production ... . The sticking point is

that the product must be/ has to/ should fullfill costumer needs, boost sales(?) and should be so low in price that supply and demand are

balanced.  And this is (...,which is also a challenge in price policy) also a task of the price politic. The price politic is concered with the finance

matters and sets prices (fixed) for the offered products.=
In price policy one is also concerned about finance matters and setting prices for the products Also they lead(s) in costumers terms of payment (what do you like to say here, I didn't

get it)
. Advertising, puplic relations, events, sponsoring and so on/and others are typical/instruments of for the promotion politic. It's all about

how to callattention
and among which average you can argumented to buy a product = It is all about rising attention and make the consumers buy your products.

At last/ Eventually there is place policy, where you are looking for an optimal channel of distribution we have the place politic. In this point you have to look for a good way or place to sell products. This raises the question if sell your product, for example, in the internet or in a big city. you decide between selling...

If you want to sell your product in a big city you must look for the best place in town and which product you want to sell. For example, it is

better when you want to sell clothes, that you search for a (crowded) place (where a lot of people, in a pedertrain zone.) In summary, I would

describe these four areas. what do you mean, that you are going to summarise or that you have allready summarised the four ps?

Of course, many factors contribute further in all the four points at the best possible marketing concept. Further factors (not described hiere) contributes for the best possible marketing concept.


Könnt ihr mir vielleicht auch ein paar Tipps geben, wie ich am besten enlische Texte ins Deutsche oder aber wie oben beschriebene Texte verfasse? Das geht mir überhaupt nicht leicht von der Hand....
Und was mir beim Tippen eben aufgefallen ist, ist die Groß- und Kleinschreibung!? Wie war das nochmal im Englischen, alles klein??? Könnt ihr mir helfen?? :spin:



VIELEN DANK

I just wanted to correct your essay but I don't claim to be absolutely right. Maybe you will get some more hints.
My advice is to write as simple as possible and keep the sentences short and use more verbs.

I hope I could help you a bit. Tata for now :-)

Arron

Re: Marketingtext -> Bitte um Verbesserung/Korrektur

Beitrag von Arron »

Ich habe versucht Ihren kleinen Aufsatz zu verbessern:


The four most important marketing instruments can be categorised into the four Ps of policy on: product, price, placement, and promotion. Their aim is to satisfy customers’ needs and desires, and their coordinated use is of great importance for a company. In order to draft a good product policy, the price, distribution, and advertising structures must be individually thought through.

Defining a price acceptable by customers in the product policy is the most important out of the four policies. A fixed price is determinant on production and the product’s nature. The price limitations are governed by a need to have the price low enough to satisfy customers’ needs, while accommodate flexibility to boost sales in order to balance supply and demand.

Price management policy is also a fundamental task of price policy, which relates to financial matters and sets fixed prices for the offered products. It also regulates the terms of sale with customers. However, advertising, public relations, events, sponsorship, etc., are primarily controlled by promotional policy. Moreover, promotional policy is written around how attention is called to the product.

Lastly, placement policy leads on from promotional policy, insomuch that it centres more on the context of where the product is going to be aimed. It deals with whether the product is marketed in a large city, or over the internet – for instance. Product placement considers the most suitable locations for the product being sold; for example, advertising in a pedestrian zone with a large amount of walkthrough traffic increases exposure. While there are many other factors which contribute to how a product is sold, these four areas are, I believe, of most importance policies in marketing.
Ich habe nicht der Satz "and among which average you can argumented to buy a product" korrigiert, weil ich nicht wusste, was Sie gemeint haben. Die Grammatik ist falsch weil das Wort "argumented" passt nicht. Wenn er wichtig ist, schreiben Sie den ganzen Satz auf Deutsch, und ich übersetzte ihn. Bitte auch bemerken, dass ich nicht alles direkt korrigiert habe, und dass ich mich kleine Teile davon interpretiert haben lasse.

Alles Bestens!

P.S. Tut mir Leid wenn mein Deutsch Fehler hat, aber hoffentlich können Sir mein Tipps noch verstehen.

Billie

Re: Marketingtext -> Bitte um Verbesserung/Korrektur

Beitrag von Billie »

Though I'm not the author of this thread I'd say thank u for the nice text, it taught me a lot. :freu: