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Ich habe hier eine Text über den australischen outback verfasst, als Übung für eine Klassenarbeit. Es wäre super, wenn jemand da mal einen Blick drauf werfen könnte:



Travel report
Finally, after a long 4-hour journey by many buses, my destination was reached: The sheep station in the Australian outback. It is my home for the next week. My first impression was, that it would have to become very dull here. Jack Collins, the owner of the sheep station told me, that once in the month road train came to bring the catering. The property of the sheep station is 50 hectares.
If here a sheep gets away, it is not found again and must probably die. On the first three days I helped to propel the sheeps the grazing land. Besides, I bruised suffers the foot. Because we did not know whether the foot has broken, we had to call the flying doctor. They came because of the big distance with the helicopter. I was impressed to the big expenditure because of myself. On the fourth day, I helped Tom, the son of Jack Collins, with the school. He has a radio, with him the teacher dictate him the tasks. On the last both days, I helped with the sheepshearing. Jack told me that there are in it also right world championships. Now the discharge stood in a queue and I think that this one very interesting week was in which I have learnt a lot.

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Ich habe hier eine Text über den australischen outback verfasst, als Übung für eine Klassenarbeit. Es wäre super, wenn jemand da mal einen Blick drauf werfen könnte:
Travel report
Finally, after a long 4-hour journey by many buses, my destination was reached: The sheep station in the Australian outback. Itwasmy home for the following week. My first impression was(no comma)that it wouldobviouslybecome very dull here. Jack Collins, the owner of the sheep station told me, thataroad train comes to bring the catering once a month. The property of the sheep station is 50 hectares.
If here a sheep gets away, anditis not found again then it must probably die. Onthe first three days I helped to drive the sheep (pl without “s”) on the grazing land. Besides, I bruised suffers my foot. Because we did not know whether or not the foot had broken, we had to call the flying doctor service. They came because of the big distance by helicopter. I was impressed by the big expenditure of time and effort just because of me. On the fourth day, I helped Tom, the son of Jack Collins, with the schoolwork. He has a radio, on which the teacher records him the tasks. On the last both days, I helped with the
sheep-shearing. Jack told me that there are in it alsoeven right world championships. Now the discharge stood in a queue(Is this a slang expression?)The departure day came,and I think that thiswas avery interesting week was in which I have learnt a lot.