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[Bäumchen]

Hallo,
da ich leider einen wirklich miserablen FQ in Englisch habe und diesen verbessern möchte,wäre es wirklich lieb,wenn jemand einen Blick auf den Text werfen würde.

The article "The Australian are being tired of their monarchy " deals with the fact,that majority are not want to have the Queen as their head of state.They want to abolish monarchy,because they want to have a rebublic.A survey outlines that more than 50% Australian are being against monarchy while only 40 % are supporting the Queen.But for the aim of having a republic the primeminster and the opposition leader want to work together .The problem ist taht all allicances have to admit to abolish monarchy.In year 1999 the republicans lost their vote-They are of the opinion that the primeminister making a law of electing the president like in Germany was guilty.Therefore the primeminister is unsure what he should do cause is is scared to lose votes.In addition the survey shows that the supporter of a republic state are more inconstant than the other. Altough the Queen is popular in Australian her son Charles isnt.If he becomes King more Austrailian would be against monarchy.Therefore the supporter of republic want to have a new kind of state after the Queen died.

Vielen Dank und liebe Grüße

[Said Nursi]

Hallo Bäumchen,
ich habe dir mal meinen Vorschlag aufgeschrieben und hoffe, dass er dir gefällt




The article "The Australian are being tired of their monarchy " deals with the fact, that the majority in Australia do not want to have the Queen as their head of state anymore. They want to abolish monarchy,because they want to have a rebublic. A survey outlines that more than 50% Australian are being against monarchy while only 40 % are supporting for the Queen. But for the aim to get a republic it is important that the primeminister and the opposition leader want to work together. So the problem is that all cances (was genau bedeutet das Wort? Was willst du damit sagen??) have to admit that monarchy must be abolished. In year 1999 the republicans lost their vote- In their opinion the primeminister has to make a law of electing like the president in Germany. Therefore the primeminister is unsure about what he should do because he do not want to lose important votes. In addition to that the survey shows that the supporter of a republic state are more inconstant than the others. Although the Queen is popular in Australian her son prince Charles is it not. If he becomes King, more Australian would be against a monarchy and this is the reason why the supporter of a republic want to have a new kind of state after the Queen died.

Du musst mehr auf deine Rechtschreibfehler achten Ansonsten glaube ich es bis jetzt so gut.