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[Stephan1988]

Hi Community,

da ich ein Fernstudium(Financial management & accountancy) auf English angefangen habe bräuchte ich kurz eure hilfe. Es wäre nett von euch wenn ihr meine kleinen Text auf grammatikalische und förmliche Fehler überprüft.
Because i have started a distance study (financial management & accountancy) in english i need your help to clear grammatically faults of the following essay.


To determine the needs of people who live in geographically and culturally different countries we have to know their habits. For example:
-    In Munich, with respect on conquer hunger and thirst, you take fatty meat plus beer.
-         In Manchester they would choose sausages/fish and chips plus tea.
-         In New York it would be something like fast-food (burgers, chicken wings) plus some lemonade.
-         In Hong Kong the people chose rice, noodles as main component of their nutrition and some Tea to quench the thirst.
-         In Bahrain they would take the rice with vegetables and lassi.

Some reasons play a major role in selection of which food is viable as main nutrition to conquer hunger and thirst. For example two of these principal reasons are climatical condition and the culture of different countries by which the population were shaped.
Vielen Dank/Thanks a lot

[Keswick (Contributor)]

[quote=Stephan1988]Hi community,

da ich ein Fernstudium (Financial management & Accountancy) auf English angefangen habe, bräuchte ich kurz eure Hilfe. Es wäre nett von euch, wenn ihr meine kleinen Texte auf grammatikalische und förmliche Fehler hin überprüft.

Because I have started a distance study (financial management & accountancy) in English, I need your help to correct grammatical mistakes of the following essay.


To determine the needs of people who live in geographically and culturally different countries we have to know their habits. For example:
- In Munich, in regards to dealing with hunger and thirst, you take fatty meat plus beer. (such as??)
- In Manchester they would choose sausages/fish and chips plus tea.
- In New York it would be something like fast-food (burgers, chicken wings) plus some lemonade.
- In Hong Kong the people choose rice, noodles as main component of their nutrition and some tea to quench the thirst.
- In Bahrain they would take the rice with vegetables and lassi.
Some reasons play a major role in selection of which food is viable as main nutrition to deal with hunger and thirst. For example two of these principal reasons are climatical condition and the culture of different countries by which the population was shaped.

Vielen Dank/Thanks a lot[/quote]

Your little essay makes me wonder where you've got the stats from?

[Stephan1988]

Erst einmal vielen Dank für die Korrektur.
Im Wesentlichen geht es nicht um eine wissentschaftliche Arbeit. Eher sollte man sich bei dieser Fragestellung seine Gedanken zum Thema "Hunger und Durst" (Bedürfnisse) machen. Daher ist alles frei erfunden und nicht belegbar durch Statistiken usw...

Gruß Stephan