Hallo, morgen ist es LEIDER mal wieder soweit: Wir schreiben Englisch! Ein Thema dieser Arbeit soll auch eine Bildergeschichte sein! Ich habe mir jetzt zum Üben noch einmal eine Geschichte rausgesucht und sie aufgeschrieben! Nun wäre es sehr lieb, wenn sie mir einer bis heute Abend noch korrigieren könnte, damit ich meine Fehler noch einmal anschauen kann. DANKE!!!
The dog
The friends Lara and Tom played football in theyr garden on a very hot day in the summer. Tom could make a very good trick with the ball. But than the ball flyed over the wall from their bad and strong naighbours. They went to the wall and saw a sign on it. There stood "Beware of the dog". Lara was angry about that because she was very scared of big dogs. They stood in front of the wall and wanted to have theyr ball. But Tom and Lara can´t go over the wall. They were too small. Then they tryed that Tom stand of Lara. But Lara can´t hold him. Then they tried that Lara stand of Tom and Tom could hold Lara. Lara went over the wall but she was so scared because of the dog. She heard the Barking from the dog. She went very careful on the way. And she chose the ball. But then she saw the dog. It wasn´t a big scary dog. It was a little dog with long ears. Lara wasn´t scared about him and then he saw the ball. She walked to her friend Tom and they played football again.
Bitte um Korrektur!!! (Bildergeschichte)
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Sina xD
Re: Bitte um Korrektur!!! (Bildergeschichte)
Hallo,
hab nur ein paar kleine Fehler gefunden, habe diese unterstrichen, damit Du sie besser findest.
The friends Lara and Tom played football in their garden on a very hot day in the summer. Tom could make a very good trick with the ball. But than the ball flew over the wall from their bad and strong neighbours. They went (ran) to the wall and saw a sign on it. There stood "Beware of the dog". Lara was angry about that because she was very scared of big dogs. They stood in front ob the wall and wanted to have their ball. But'Tom and Lara coudn't go over the wall. They were to small.
Der Rest stimmt.
Kannst Du mal nach meinem Problem schauen`? "If clauses 2. Typ - romantic letter
Tschüs
hab nur ein paar kleine Fehler gefunden, habe diese unterstrichen, damit Du sie besser findest.
The friends Lara and Tom played football in their garden on a very hot day in the summer. Tom could make a very good trick with the ball. But than the ball flew over the wall from their bad and strong neighbours. They went (ran) to the wall and saw a sign on it. There stood "Beware of the dog". Lara was angry about that because she was very scared of big dogs. They stood in front ob the wall and wanted to have their ball. But'Tom and Lara coudn't go over the wall. They were to small.
Der Rest stimmt.
Kannst Du mal nach meinem Problem schauen`? "If clauses 2. Typ - romantic letter
Tschüs