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Mrsvain

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Hallo ihr Lieben...

könnt ihr mal über diesen "wundervollen" Text gucken und mir sagen, was alles falsch ist und was ich ändern soll...
es sollte ein report werden, nur zur Info... :)

ich hoffe ihr könnt mir helfen

Twitter: Fad or political tool?

In the following I want to wirte a report about the topic „twitter – fad or political tool?“
Twitter is a digital application to blogging something, it´s also a social network site, who a lot of person talk about their lifes.
Many people are registe on twitter, here you can find a lot of stars.
Organisations, mass media, private person use twitter for the dissemination of text messages. On twitter you can follow your friends, stars, politicans and you can catch up on a lot of companies.
On twitter you can learn new people or you can change information with friends – it happen a information sharing. You can tweeting photos, feelings and messages – all in all you can have a lot of fun on this social network site.
But twitter can be dangerous, there are a lot of fake profils and sometimes the invasion of privacy is endangered (gefährdet).

Is twitter a political tool or fad?
On the one side it is a fad,because of the stars twitter is only for some interesting, someone want to be like her or his hero´s, throught twitter they have contact with them and can communicated with them.
On the other side it is a political tool, because a lot of companies use twitter for doing advertising, it is cheap and simple for them, it can be influence.But in the course of time, the number of registered will go back, because of the other social network sites, like facebook.

lancasteruk

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In the following I want to write a report about the topic "twitter – fad or political tool?“
Twitter is a digital application [for blogging about something/which allows people to blog about something] and is also a social network site in which a lot of people talk about their daily lives.
Many people are registered on twitter and on it you can find a lot of stars.
Organisations, mass media and private individuals all use twitter for the dissemination of text messages. On twitter you can follow your friends, stars and politicans and can [catch up on / keep up to date with] a lot of companies.
On twitter you can [meet/get to know] new people or you can exchange information with friends. You can tweet photos, feelings and messages – all in all you can have a lot of fun on this social network site.
[But/However] twitter can also be dangerous; there are a lot of fake profiles and sometimes the privacy of users is endangered.

Is twitter a political tool or fad?
On the one hand it is a fad,because of the stars twitter is only interesting for some; namely those who want to be like their heros. Through twitter they have contact with them and can communicate with them.
On the other hand it is a political tool, because a lot of companies use twitter for advertising. It is cheap and simple for them and can be extremely influential.However in the [course of time/fullness of time], the number of registered users will likely recede due to other social network sites, [like/such as] facebook.
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Mrsvain

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Vielen lieben Dank...