Es währe nett wenn jemnd mir diesen Text Kontrolliert !!!

[viktor98]

Hallo, ich soll eine Geschichte über ein Bild machen auf dem man einen Junge sieht, der auf der Scheibe eines Flugzeuges ist / überfahren wird.Es were mett wenn jemand es mir kontrolliert und verbessert.Ich bin in der 8 Klasse. Danke im voraus



It all begann on the morning that my friend called me Maria will take a plane to Hong Kong. She will live in Honk Kong because her father found a new job their. I was on my way to the airport, but it was to late and Maria was already at the plane which fly to Hong Kong.
It was my last chance tu run at the runway on which Maria's plane start.
If I see the plane i stand at the front of the plane to stop it, but it was to late to brake.
The captain run over me and I died and never see Maria again. ( Das ende ist mir nicht wirklich gelungen )

[lancasteruk]

It all began on the morning that my friend calledme to tell me that Mariais takinga plane to Hong Kong. Sheis going tolive in HongKong because her father found a new jobthere. I was on my way to the airport, but it wasalreadytoolate and Maria was alreadyonthe plane whichwas flyingto Hong Kong.
It was my last chancetorunon tothe runwayfromwhich Maria's planewas taking off.
I saw the plane and stood in the front of it to stop it, but it wastoolate to brake.
The captainranover me(ran me over klingt besser)and I died andwillnever see Maria again.

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