Einleitung

[vato89]

Hi, ich habe hier eine kurze Einleitung zu einer Charakterisierung. Danke

The story "A stranger" from Tom Shepert written in the year 1997 deals with a man called Alex who decided to travel when he was 21 years old. 5 Years later he wants to come home and lives there again. But than he notices that he has not any friends there. His family have died 2 years ago by a car accident. His best friend usually called Ben left the city 4 years ago even like Alex. Alex do not know what he schould do. After a long period of thoughts he decided to kill himself.

[tiorthan]

The story "A stranger" from Tom Shepert written in the year 1997 deals with a man called Alex who decided to travel when he was 21 years old. 5 Years later he wants to come home and live there again. But then he notices that he has no friends there. His family members have died 2 years ago in a car accident. His best friend usually called Ben left the city 4 years ago just like Alex. Alex does not know what he schould do. After a long period of thoughts he decides to kill himself.

Und "Ben" heißt sonst nicht so? Oder warum hast du da "usually" geschrieben?

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Ein paar Ooopserchen:
The story "A stranger" by Tom Shepert was written in (the year) 1997 and deals with a man called Alex who decided to travel when he was 21 years old. 5 years later he wants to come home and live there again. But then he notices that he has no friends there. His family members have died 2 years ago in a car accident. His best friend usually called Ben left the city 4 years ago just like Alex (da Alex früher als vor 4 Jahren gegangen ist, passt hier auch das "just like" nicht richtig, also einfach weglassen). Alex does not know what to do/ he schould do. After a long period of thinking he decides to kill himself.

Und "Ben" heißt sonst nicht so? Oder warum hast du da "usually" geschrieben?

Grüße
Duckduck

[vato89]

Hi, danke für die Korrektur. Irgendwie mache ich sogar Flüchtigkeitsfehler, wenn ich mir Zeit lasse beim Schreiben. Aber ich werde es weiter üben. Danke!

Achja "usually called Ben" deshalb weil er mit kompletten Namen Benjamin heißt.