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[Happening]

Hallo,

ich habe hier ein Text zum Thema "Social relationship in a company" geschrieben. Bitte schaut nach Fehlern (Grammatik und Satzbau) nach.

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Relationship between colleagues tin the workplace is important for teamwork. On your first day in the company you should form relationships with your new colleagues and build up network of contacts. Explore your work environment. If your boss is a cruel tyrant you should make better connection with other employees. The colleagues should motivate each other for the better teamwork. However in a team you must also be able to work independendly. If the boss doesnot wants to lose his respect he should always be factual and fair to employees. But sometimes there are harassments in the workplace. Also know as ‘mobbing’. In this case you as victim should change your job.
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danke

[eac swa]

Hallo,

ich habe hier ein Text zum Thema "Social relationship in a company" geschrieben. Bitte schaut nach Fehlern (Grammatik und Satzbau) nach.

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Relationships between colleagues in the workplace are important for teamwork. On your first day in the company you should form relationships with your new colleagues and build up a network of contacts. Explore your work environment. If your boss is a cruel tyrant you should seek to make connections with other employees. (Ich habe das "better" weggenommen - wenn man bis jetzt keine "relationships" hat, wie kann man das "besser" machen?) Colleagues should motivate each other (in order to) to promote better teamwork in the workplace. However in a team you must also be able to work independently. If the boss doesn't want to lose the respect of his employees, he should always be factual and fair to them. However, sometimes a person will be harassed in the workplace, which is something known as ‘mobbing’. In this case, you as a victim should change your job.
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danke