Berichtigung einer Beurteilung von einem Lehrer

[borussenleon]

Hallo!
Ich musste eine Beurteilung meines Lehrers auf Englisch übersetzen. Kann die Übersetzung jemand korrigieren?

Übersetzung des von Ihnen geschriebenen Textes:

***** is always motivated in a high measure and realises very persistent the given and self-set goals. Being punchore for the lessons and regulary school attendance have a big priority for him. I a positive sense he is a ambitious student. Dificult exercises don´t get ***** into any trouble. He uses his expertises with success in all kinds of subjects. He updates his knowledge through active participation in the classroom what also can be seen in his grades.

His behaviour towards teachers and other students is exemplary. He makes a good contribution for teamwork. He likes to help students with a weaker performance. Towards theachers he is cooperative. He representes opinion but can alo accept the opinion of others.
I think he will get on really well with his host family and he could represent the culture of Germany.


Danke

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[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hallo!
Ich musste eine Beurteilung meines Lehrers auf Englisch übersetzen. Kann die Übersetzung jemand korrigieren?

Übersetzung des von Ihnen geschriebenen Textes:

***** is always highly motivated in a high measure and very persistently follows the given and self-set goals. Arriving on time for the lessons and regular school attendance have high priority for him. He is a ambitious student. (ich wuerde das positive sense rauslassen, wenn du keinen negative sense folgen laesst). Difficult exercises don´t get ***** into any trouble. He successfully uses his expertise with success in a variety of subjects. He improves his knowledge even further through active participation in the classroom which reflects in his grades.

His behaviour towards teachers and other students is exemplary. He contributes well to the team. He likes to help low-performing students with a weaker performance. He cooperates well with the teachers. He represents his own opinion but can also accept the opinion of others.
I think he will get on really well with his host family and he could represent the culture of Germany.


Danke

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