bitte korrigiert mir doch diesen Text. Ich schreibe einfach etwas über einen Schauspieler zur Übung. Ich habe mir einfach den deutschen Text von Wikipedia als Vorlage genommen und übersetze jetzt einfach frei raus, ohne in ein Wörterbuch oder Ähnliches zu gucken. Sätze, bei denen ich nicht so recht wusste, habe ich einfach etwas umgeschrieben.
Bitte sagt mir doch auch wie ihr meine Englischkenntisse einschätzt und wo ihr denkt, dass es noch hake.
http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Benicio_del_Toro
Benicio del Toro
Benicio Del Toro was born as second son from Gustavo and Fausta Toro. His parents were rich solicitors in Puerto Rico, where he spent a big part of his childhood. When he was 9 his mother died on Hepatitis. First his aunt looked after him, who was also a lawyer. On the catholic school, on which he went, he was known as a nice pupil.
After his father had married, Benicio went in the age of 13 to a fullday-school in Pennsylvania. At first he was alone. It was the first time in which he had to stay without parents and he just spoke a little bit English. Through the basketball-playing he found some friends and social contacts. In the year 1998 he finished school and with him Michael Davies who produced the American TV-Show Who will be Millionair.
With 18 years he went to San Diego University and he wrote himself in, in the subject Economic-Science. Actually he was supposed to follow the family-tradition and become a lawyer, also himself had never thought to be an actor. At the University he tried to get a role in a theatre-play succesfully. Because of the study-rules, which said that actors must be involved in the subject Theatre-Science, he changed his subject. He told his family later from that. When it was obvious that Benicio takes acting serious, his family supported him not really. His older brother Gustavo, who was a student at the University of California, helped him and gave him space in his flat.
To the opinion of his family, that said that acting can not be something with which you can get money, he answered: I didn’t see it that way. I saw it as a marriage“
He didn't have problems to become a lawyer he even saw a similar things between acting and lawying but he found his right thing in the acting, even when he was the only one in the family with a actorjob.
After that Benicio went to New york to the actor-school Circle in the Square, which is placed next to the broadway. After a short time he came back to California and get a diplom for the Stella Adler Academy and was studying there for few years. Del Toros says, that Stella Adler, who died in 1992, did a lot for him.
Two years after finshing his diplom in Meresburg, he get his first movie role, but just in the TV. He was used in the crimserie Miami Vice for a beside-role. After the episode ''Show-Businesss'' in autumn 1987 he get a few other small roles. But Toro did not like the work for the TV, because it was to strange and he missed the time to became the characters in all ways.
So, mal bis hierhin.
Danke
