Hilfe bei Sätzen...

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presslufthammer

Hilfe bei Sätzen...

Beitrag von presslufthammer »

Moin Moin
Erstmal allen ein Frohes Fest.
Auch die Feiertage halten mich nicht vom Lernen ab.
Ich brauch aber mal eure Hilfe, bei einigen Sätzen komme ich nicht ganz weiter, also kann man das so schreiben:

1) I think she loves him but she knows that their love has no prospects.
2) She goes to church goes fishing, sailing and other things that she hasn't done for a long time.
3) It didn't matter of her husband. (Es war ihrem Ehemann egal)
4) Midge was always sad and I think the two were glad that Midge died.

Und noch einen kurzen Text:
Dwight likes Moira and with it all the time with her. By Moira(durch Moira?) he gets new power for his next trips and for the rest of his life. He spends his free time with her, but Dwight is already married. He knows that his family hasn't survived the war and the radioactivity. At the end of the story, Dwight and his crew go with his submarine to the bottom of the ocean in order to end their lives. He doesn't pick up Moira because he says that everybody should die in their own way. The last way of Dwight's submarine leads him to his beloved family.[Der letzte Weg seines Uboots führt ihn endlich wieder zu seiner geliebten Familie(Kann man das so schreiben?)]

Ich hoffe ihr könnt mir weiterhelfen:)

Gruß

presslufthammer

Re: Hilfe bei Sätzen...

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Kann mir keiner Helfen?Wäre echt super...

joy

Re: Hilfe bei Sätzen...

Beitrag von joy »

presslufthammer hat geschrieben:Kann mir keiner Helfen?Wäre echt super...
Moin Moin
Erstmal
s allen ein Frohes Fest.
Auch die Feiertage halten mich nicht vom Lernen ab.
Ich brauch
e aber mal eure Hilfe, bei einigen Sätzen komme ich nicht ganz weiter, also kann man das so schreiben:

1) I
think she loves him but she knows that their relationship has no future.2) She goes to church goes fishing, sailing and does other things that she hasn't done for a long time.
3) It didn't matter
to her husband. (Es war ihrem Ehemann egal)
4) Midge
was always sad and I think the two were glad that Midge died.

Und noch einen kurzen Text:
Dwight likes Moira and
so spends all the time with her. Through Moira(durch Moira?) he gets (Or: Moira gives him) new power for his next trips and for the rest of his life. He spends his free time with her (Wiederholung). Unfortunately, Dwight is already married. He knows that his family hasn't survived the war and the radioactivity. At the end of the story, Dwight and his crew go with his submarine to the bottom of the ocean in order to end their lives. He doesn't pick up Moira because he says that everybody should die in their own way. The last voyage of Dwight's submarine leads him to his beloved family at last.
[Der letzte Weg seines Uboots führt ihn endlich wieder zu seiner geliebten Familie(Kann man das so schreiben?)]

Ich hoffe ihr könnt mir weiterhelfen:)

Gruß

Noch einen schönen Ausklang des Jahres 2011.