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Letter of motivation
Dear Mr
I'm studying Business Administration with a specialisation in controlling and HRM in the seventh semester at the UNI University of Applied Sciences in STADT.
Since 01.08.2011 I have been working by FIRMA GmbH in ORT as trainee. On 31.10.2011 I have completed my placement successful in the controlling department. Currently I am working on my bachelor thesis in the Accounting department of FIRMA, which expected to last until the end of March 2012.
I always have a special interest for Indian culture, history and Indian peoples. Even of this great passion for India, I started early to learn the Indian language. Because it is my solid goal to life and work in India in the next future to gain more experience in social and economic fields.
The Indian economy is growing fast and has a big influence to would economy and trade. It is very important for the success of the global companies and their employees to understand the Countries like China and India.
For that reason are the FIRMA represented by two companies in India, Faridabad and Chandigarh. Some employees of the FIRMA also get the opportunity to work for a time in India and to get to know new people, culture and new work environment.
I would like to be a part of it, so I have the aim to get a position at the FIRMA after the completion of my studies.
I am sure that this tour to India will improve my chances for getting a job by FIRMA India Ltd.
Then with this tour to India I will get the big chance to acquaint myself with Indian culture, economic situation, in India based companies, and the Indian people.
I was born grow up in LAND, so I am familiar with the tradition and the culture of countries like Pakistan and Indien.
As kid I have life in Pakistan for a time, so I can speak indie every well. Since July I am working for Bethel, Von Lear foundation and AWO in ORT as translator for SPRACHE and Indie.
In addition I am learning English since 15 years in the school, college and university and can speak business fluent.
I would be very glad if I could participate in the tour, because I'm almost finished with my studies and start my professional life it is my last opportunity to make a trip to Asia.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely

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Letter of motivation
Dear Mr


I'm studying Business Administration with a specialisation in controlling and HRM in the seventh semester at theUNIUniversity of Applied Sciences inSTADT.Since 01August2011,I have been workingatFIRMAGmbH inORTas a trainee. On 31 October2011 I have completed my placement successfullyin the controlling department. Currently I am working on my Bachelor thesis in the Accounting department of FIRMA, whichisexpected to last until the end of March 2012.
Ihavealways hada special interestinIndian culture, history and Indian people.It wasthis great passion for IndiathatI started earlyin lifeto learn the Indian language. Because it is my solid goal to life and work in India in thenearfuture to gain more experience in social and economic fields.
The Indian economy is growing fast and has a big influence to world economy and trade. It is very important for the success of the global companies and their employees to understand thecountries like China and India.
For that reason are theFIRMEN? arerepresented by two companies in India, Faridabad and Chandigarh. Some employees of theFIRMAalso get the opportunity to work forsometime in India and to get to know new people,a newculture and new workingenvironment.
I would like to be a part of it, so I have the aim to get a position at theFIRMAafter the completion of my studies.
I am sure that this tour to India will improve my chancesofgetting a jobatFIRMAIndia Ltd.
Then with this tour to India I will get the big chance to acquaint myself withtheIndian culture, economic situation, in India based companies, and the Indian people.
I was bornandgrew up inLAND,so I am familiar with the tradition and the culture of countries like Pakistan and India.
Asa child,I livedin Pakistan forsometime, so I can speakIndie?? (Unknown to me) very well. Since July I am working for Bethel, Von Lear foundation and AWO in ORT as a translator for SPRACHE and Indie.
In addition I have been learning English for 15 years at school, college and university and can speak business English fluently.
I would be very glad if I could participate in the tour, because I'm almost finished with my studies and start my professional life and thus, it is my last opportunity to make a trip to Asia.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely