könnte jemand von euch (liebe Duckduck oder Joy, wäre super wenn ihr beim Anschauen dieses Themas kurz mal einen Blick über meinen Text werfen könntet, andere User sind aber natürlich auch willkommen
) so nett sein und mir diesen Text ansehen, denn ich würde den besagten Aufsatz diese Woche noch unbedingt brauchen 
Advantages and disadvantages of a holiday.
Every year a lot of people from everywhere of the world book a house or a department in a place there they want to spend their holidays. A holiday is certainly a good occasion to have a little bit of repose from the everyday life. There are a lot of good arguments for a holiday, but there are also many disadvantages. I love it personally because I think that a leave in an other country is always a good possibility to learn something about an other culture and maybe a foreign language. But you have also to know that there are also a lot of arguments against a holiday. A good example are the travelling expenses, because the costs are very high, if you want to spent your holiday in an interesting place and live in a comfortable housing with a fascinating view on a sea or even on a sight. There are still a lot of disadvantages why a holiday is not in every case a good thing. Many people have also a pet, like a dog or a cat, at home and they have a problem, if they haven´t any relatives or good friends, which are worry about their pets during they spend their holidays. That´s often a problem because it could be very costly if you fly with a plane and want to take your pet with you. In addition it is often very unpleasant for pets to travel in this way. On these grounds I think that people, which have a house with a garden, should spend their three time there, because then the pet would be happy and his owner could save his money for other things.
Hoffentlich sind in meinem Text nicht all zu viele Fehler drinnen, auf jeden Fall, schon vielen Dank im Voraus für eure Hilfsbereitschaft
Ich wünsche euch allen noch einen wunderschönen Abend!
Cornel