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Dear friend,
how are you?
My family and I are going to emigrate to the USA. We would come with the fairy to the USA.
We would life in New York and I hope we life in Manhattan, because you life there too.
I heard so many interesting things about Manhattan.
Can you give me advices or what will expected in the USA???
I am very afraid of the move to the USA to New York, because when we are on Ellis Island we were check closely in Ellis Island hospital. I hope my whole family will stay in New York.
How was it with your family? Were you separated?
I planed so much to do in the USA. There are so many things to do.
I hope to see you soon!
I am looking forward to it!!

MANY KISSES AND HUGS
yours........

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:DDear friend,
how are you?
My family and
Imeare going to emigrate to the USA. Wewouldwill come with thefairyferry  to the USA.
We would
lifelive  in New York and I hope wewilllivein Manhattan, because youlivethere,too.
I heard so many interesting things about Manhattan.
Couldyou give meanyadvices or whatwillisexpected in the USA???
I am very afraid of the move to the USA
andto New York, because when weareon Ellis Island wewill becheckedclosely in Ellis Island hospital. I hope my whole family will stay in New York.
How was it with your family? Were you separated?
I plan
ned so much to do in the USA. There are so many things to do.
I hope to see you soon!
I am looking forward to it!!
Life= das Leben
to live= leben




MANY KISSES AND HUGS
yours........