Drei Sätze zum korrigieren, danke ;)

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evyli

Drei Sätze zum korrigieren, danke ;)

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Ein Teil vom "Hostfamily" Brief.

In addition, I regularly look after a seven-year-old girl named *** I help her with mathematics homework, play with her, read to her and put her to bed. She is very bright, cheerful and intelligent. I immediately took her in my heart. Moreover I buying groceries, preparing snacks and cooking for ***. I like to spend time with her.

Delfino

Re: Drei Sätze zum korrigieren, danke ;)

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evyli hat geschrieben:Ein Teil vom "Hostfamily" Brief.

In addition, I regularly look after a seven-year-old girl named ***.
She is very bright, cheerful and intelligent. I immediately took her in my heart.
I help her with her mathematics homework, play with her, read to her and put her to bed.
Moreover, I buy groceries, prepare snacks and cook for ***.
I really like to spend time with her. / I really enjoy spending time with her.

evyli

Re: Drei Sätze zum korrigieren, danke ;)

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Danke für die Korrektur. ;)