Bitte korrigieren :)

[Cornel]

Ich habe gerade bemerkt, dass hier noch keiner meinen Text angeschaut hat, kann jemand BITTE so lieb sein und mir diese Texte ansehen, denn die Zwei würde ich Morgen unbedingt benötigen, ist nämlich eine Hausaufgabe

[joy]

Hallo Leute,
es wäre super, wenn sich jemand von euch mal diese Texte ansehen könnte und sie eventuell korrigiert

Hi Maria!
How are you? I hope you have also got some free weeks off. If so, how are you spending your holidays? Have you decided where you want to go on holiday? I think that offer for the language holiday in Venetic sounded very good or have you decided to spend your holidays at home? Anyway, I flew together with my husband Dave to Australia. We have decided to choose also a language course, which we are going to(“going to", weil es geplant ist) attendin the next four weeks. (Oder einfach: In the next four weeks, we are going to attend a language course there.) We want to improve our English skills and learn something about the Australian culture and the aborigines. We think also that the course at the language school is a very interesting opportunity to meet people, from different countries. It is very funny because the most of these guys are about our age. It is also very good that we are here in Sydney because we have there a lot of good occasions to spend funny evenings together with the other people of the school. But we are not going not to spend our whole time in this city. As soon as the course will be finished, we are going to drive with a hired car across through Australia, because we also want to drive to other cities like Canberra and Melbourne. Then we want alsoto spend a week in the outback, where we are going to stay together with an aborigine, who is going to show us a lot of interesting places and something about the culture of his tribe. I know, it will be a fascinating time here. By the way, I have forgottensomething; Dave has a terrible stomach ache. I think he ate something that has gone bad. Well, I must finish now, because we have to go to our language course. I am looking forward to your answer.


Greetings from Sydney,
Mary



Das wären also mal meine Texte, wäre echt super, wenn ihr euch das einmal ansehen könntet Vielen Dank schon im Voraus für eure Hilfe


LG.
Cornel

Meine Zeit reichte leider nur für den ersten Teil.