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Hallo :freu:,
muss am Montag in der Berufschule ein Vortrag über mich selber halten. Und Englisch ist absolut nicht meine Stärke. Wäre somit klasse, wenn ihr mal drüber lesen könntet. Danke schon mal im Voraus.


Hello everyone let me introduce myself to you. In my presentation about my person, I will confine myself to the following points a) personal dates b)my schooling c) after school d) hobbies e)Personal desires on future f) Why atechnical profession?g) mobility
Now the first item personal dates.
I am Marcel, 22 years old, unmarried and was born near the Baltic Sea in a small town named **** in 1989.I have lived now in **** since 19th of August this year.
Then I will look at my schooling. In the year 1996, I started school and visited for four years the elementary school. Between 2000 and 2006 I attended the comprehensive school and came out with E-Level.
Next a few words to apprenticeship.
After the finally exam I trained an apprenticeship to computer scientiest for systems, but it was not the right for me. After the apprenticeship I did my alternative service at ****. My alternative service, which made me a lot of fun, I accomplished in a nursing home. Now I do an apprenticeship to electrian for systems and devices at *****’s.
Continuing with my hobbies.

I often play football with friends. I love it turning up the volume and listen to rock. Another hobby is collect vinyl records. I have about 80 vinyls at home. The most are limited editions. This Vinyl, which I show, is limited to 300 restrictions.
The next part are my personal disires on future.

For the future I wish founding a family with 2 children andIf I was rich, I would buy a sports car and a villa. I just want to seewhat the future might bring.
Now to point f) why a technical profession?
The main reason is the interest for technics. Furthermore are technical professionsforward-looking, because more and more technical devices make life easier for us.
Last but not least mobility. Two years ago I got my driver's licence to be independent. Therefor I bought my own car. It’s a red Peugeot.It's not the best an not the fastest, but for the first car, it is okay.

That brings me to the end of my presentation, thank for listening

joy

Re: Sich selber vorstellen.

Beitrag von joy »

Telekoma hat geschrieben:
Hallo,
muss am Montag in der Berufsschule ein Vortrag über mich selber halten. Und Englisch ist absolut nicht meine Stärke. Wäre somit klasse, wenn ihr mal drüber lesen könntet.Danke schon mal im Voraus.

Hello everyone let me introduce myself to you. In my presentation about my person, I will divide my presentation about my person in to the following points:

a)Personal data
b)Schooling
c)After school
d)Hobbies
e) Personal desiresfor thefuture
f) Why a technical profession?
g)Mobility

Ich würde weniger Themen nehmen: z.B: Personal data – schooling – career – hobbies – future plans
Now the first item - personal data.
I am Marcel, 22 years old,singleand was born near the Baltic Sea in a small town named **** in 1989. I have lived now in **** since 19th of August this year.
Then I will look at my schooling.
In the year 1996, I started school and visited for four years the elementary schoolfor four years. Between 2000 and 2006 I attended the comprehensive school and came out with an E-level.
Next a few words to apprenticeship.
After the finally exam I trained an apprenticeship to
as acomputer scientist for systems, but it was not the right for me. After the apprenticeship I did my alternative service at ****.My alternative service, whichwasa lot of fun, I accomplished in a nursing home.Now I do an apprenticeshipas anelectrician for systems and devices at *****’s.
Continuing with my hobbies.
I often play football with friends. I love it
listening to rock music andturning up the volume and listen to rock. Another hobby is collectingVinyl records. I have about 80Vinyls athome. The most are limited editions, andThis Vinyl, which I showonly those Vinyls,which are limited to 300 editions? restrictions.
The next partis aboutmy personal desires for thefuture.
(or: plans for the future / future plans.

For the future I wish founding a family with 2 children and
If Iwererich, I would buy a sports car and a villa.I just want to see what the future might bring.
Now to point f) why a technical profession?
The main reason is the interest in technics. Furthermore are technical professions forward-looking, because more and more technical devices make life easier for us. Last but not leastmobility. Two years ago I got my driver's licence to be independent. Therefor I bought my own car. It’s a red Peugeot.It's neither the best nor the fastest, but for the first car, it is okay. That brings me to the end of my presentation, thank for listening