tolle Möglichkeit die hier geboten wird
Ich gebe mir viel Mühe in English, jedoch diese Sprache eine reine Baustelle für mich.
Wir schreiben in paar Wochen zweite Klausur ( in der ersten 5 Punkte bekommen...), daher übe ich viel.
Dieser Text handelt über das Buch "The Kite Runner". Wir sollten über ein Vorfall berichten und das Benehmen
des Protagonisten kommentieren.
Hoffe ihr habt Zeit und Lust mein Text zu korrigieren und mir paar Tipps zu geben
Freue mich schon auf eure Antworten.If someone gets raiped it is always a horrible situation. Amir saw how his friend was beaten up by 3 boys. He could not help Hassan who was always there for him and protected him against bullys. He just saw how his friend gets raiped and was paralyzed because he was scared. When Yussuf started to put off his clothes Amir turned around and run away.
His intern conflict was about making the decision to whether be there for his friend or not. He does not knew should he protect Hassan or not but finally he gave up.
He chosed to run away. He is scared to be hurt by Assef and his friends, he said to himself. But it was not the true and he knew that.
Amir sacrificed Hassan hopping that the relationship to Baba will improve. He was like Abraham who had to kill his son to show God that he love him. But in this case there was no sheep which could save the live of Hassan. Of course Hassan did not die but he is signed for his whole live.
The protagonist acted like a coward. He not only destroyed a friendship he has faild like a man.
But at onother hand he is a little boy which had to deal with rape. It is difficult to judge on Amir.
His mistake was in his logic that loose Hassen is the price to reach his goal, his father.
And the poor Hassan was on the worng place at the wrong time.
Ich bedanke mich jetzt schon mal
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