Business Correspondence- / sales

[anonym123]

Hi, es geht darum, dass ich ein Angebot schreiben musste und hier ist der Text dazu:

Dear Mrs. xyz,

we were pleased to hear that you are interested in our products.
We can accept your special conditions and offer a quanity discount orders for at least 10.000$.
Also we grant 3 % cash discount for payment within 10 days. After order received we deliver within 2 weeks ex works.
Please note our terms and conditions that you can find in our attachment.
Your ordered samples will send seperately.

I hope this quotation will find your approval.

We look forward to welcoming you as our customer.

Yours faithfully

Ist das so okay?

Danke schon mal im Voraus.

Gruß

anonym123

[SanDiego]

Hallo anonym123,

hier mein Vorschlag für deinen Geschäftsbrief.


LG

Dear Sirs, We are pleased to hear that you are interested in our products.
We herby inform you that we accept your special conditions and would like to offer you a quantity discount for an order quantity of at least $ 10.000. Your orders are also subject to a 3 % cash discount for payments within 10 days of goods receipt.
After your order has been received by us we deliver within 2 weeks ex works.
Enclosed please find our terms and conditions. We assure you that your ordered samples will be delivered promptly in a separate shipment.
We hope this quotation will find your approval and look forward to welcoming you as our customers.
If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact us.
Sincerely,