About my person ...

[Vulymuz]

Hallo,

wir haben für den Montag eine Hausaufgabe aufbekommen, uns kurz vorzustellen (11. Klasse). Hier der Text:

My name is [...]. My passion is playing football. It's because if I play football, I'm only concentrated to play good, so that in this moment I'm not thinking about other things.
In addition if I'm not playing football, I like to meet my friends in order to go to the cinema or playing bowling for example.

I'm 18 years old and living in Germany for seven years. I've got two brothers, who are study in Aachen, but on the weekend they are mostly here by us in Remscheid.

Danke schon mal für eure Unterstützung.

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hi Vulymuz und willkommen im Forum!

Hallo,

wir haben für den Montag eine Hausaufgabe aufbekommen, uns kurz vorzustellen (11. Klasse). Hier der Text:

My name is [...]. I'm 18 years old and come from ... originally. I have been living in Germany for seven years. I've got two brothers who are studying in Aachen, but they visit us here in Remscheid most weekends.

My passion/favourite hobby is playing football. It helps me to relax and forget about my problems, because when/while I'm playing football, I'm only concentrating on playing well so that in this moment I'm not thinking about other things. (Das "if" ist hier nicht richtig, weil es "falls/für den Fall dass" bedeutet.)
I also like meeting my friends. We do a lot of things together like going to the cinema or bowling.

Danke schon mal für eure Unterstützung.

Ich habe die Reihenfolge etwas geändert, das kommt mir passender vor.


Viele Grüße
Duckduck