Hallo. In dieser Aufgab geht es die Jagdszene und deren Funktion.
The function of the hunting scene in the middle of the story is the demonstration of the extension of the misunderstanding between father and son. The sick child must think the father goes out to hunt and enjoys himself while his son is in bed and thinks (oder is thinking) about his death. So this story is within the story. In the story there is a description of nature which is covered with a "glassy surface" because it is all icy and it is difficult to stand wtih his dog on the icy ground. It is the same in the story because the father sees that his son is worried about something but the father does not know the reason therefore and he does not ask him. In this hunting scene the circle of life appears. He can catch a few birds but some are able to escape. There is an invisible wall between the father and nature. there is an invisible wall between the father and son, too.
Ist das ok?
Vielen Dank für die Hilfe.
LG
saturn
A Day's Wait- Hunting scene
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SanDiego
Re: A Day's Wait- Hunting scene
Hallo saturn,
viel gibt es ja bei dir nicht zu korrigieren, da das meiste von einer Website abgeschrieben wurden ist. Das du da manchmal das zweite oder dritte Wort in einem Satz geändert hast hat da auch nicht viel gebracht.
Ich habe trotzdem ein Paar Sachen korrigiert von denen die du selber geschrieben hast.
LG
The function of the hunting scene in the middle of the story is to demonstrate the extension of the misunderstanding between father and son. As the father is outside hunting the son is in bed and is thinking about death. In this part of the story it is a story is within the story. In the story there is a description of nature which is covered with a "glassy surface" because it is all icy and it is difficult to stand with his dog on the icy ground. It is the same in the story because the father sees that his son is worried about something but the father does not know the reason and he does not ask his son. In this hunting scene the circle of life appears. He can catch a few birds but some are able to escape. There is an invisible wall between the father and nature and between the father and son, too.
viel gibt es ja bei dir nicht zu korrigieren, da das meiste von einer Website abgeschrieben wurden ist. Das du da manchmal das zweite oder dritte Wort in einem Satz geändert hast hat da auch nicht viel gebracht.
Ich habe trotzdem ein Paar Sachen korrigiert von denen die du selber geschrieben hast.
LG
The function of the hunting scene in the middle of the story is to demonstrate the extension of the misunderstanding between father and son. As the father is outside hunting the son is in bed and is thinking about death. In this part of the story it is a story is within the story. In the story there is a description of nature which is covered with a "glassy surface" because it is all icy and it is difficult to stand with his dog on the icy ground. It is the same in the story because the father sees that his son is worried about something but the father does not know the reason and he does not ask his son. In this hunting scene the circle of life appears. He can catch a few birds but some are able to escape. There is an invisible wall between the father and nature and between the father and son, too.