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Arthur Miller „All my Sons“


1)The text “All My Sons” written by Arthur Miller in 1947 is a drama which is playing after the Second World War. The drama is a three-act play. The story does handle about Joe Keller, who produced airplane parts during the second World War. He send a batch that he knows to the front and because of it 21 pilots died. One of his sons Larry don´t wants to leave with it and committed suicide. Three and a half Years Joe could hide the truth but one day the truth comes out.


This text excerpt is the third act of the story and does handle about a dramatically family discussion between Chris, his mother, Ann (earlier the girlfriend of Larry and now of Chris) and his father Joe Keller (his father). The setting of the play is the front of their house. Chris wants to leave the family and go to Cleveland. He can´t forgive the guilt of his father. Ann wants to go with him, but Chris says no. Than Ann put out a letter from Larry. Larry has written it on the day he died. In this letter Larry explain that he can´t leave with the guilt of his father and killed himself. This is the moment where the story becomes more dramatic. Joe said to Chris to get the car and go into the house for his jacket. A few moments later they have hear a shot from the house. Joe Keller killed himself.
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2)The relationship between Chris and his father, Joe, is strained because of an mistake from Joe. Joe Keller make a mistake that killed 21 pilots and the second world war. As result of that Larry, his other son, killed him self. Chris hates his father since he knows about his guilt. He is confidants that his father have to be punished for this. Chris and his father are both angry with each other. Chris because of the mistake of his father and Joe because his son wants to listen him. Joe Keller tries to reconciled with his son but Chris becomes only more furious. After the suicide of Joe Keller Chris change his mind and started to cry. This shows that he loved his father, but he was to angry to admit it. 137




3)The problem is that Kate trying to mediate Between his son Chris and his husband Joe but they are to angry with each other. She tries to stop him and doesn´t want that he goes to Cleveland because of a problem with his father. Than she tries to hold from Ann to give a letter from Larry, that he has written on his day of death, to Chris and he could read it. After that she tries to stop Joe read the letter, because she fears the react of him. Now she tries to calm Joe and says him that he has two sons. But this makes it only worse and Joe answers that the other 21 soldiers are his sons, too. The other thing that Kate´s is that Chris wants to brings Joe to prison and Joe wouldn´t survive it. The part of Kate in Joe´s guilt is that she fails by trying to submit between Chris and Joe. 164




4)Ann speaks and operates in this text in the least, but she makes the most important think for the other events. She gives a letter from Larry that he has written on his day of death. After Joe read this letter, he accepts his guilt.




5)“All my Sons”, “Death of a Salesman” and “An Inspector Calls” are dramas. “All my Sons” and “Death of a Salesman” are family dramas, while “Call of a Salesman” is a social drama. “Death of a Salesman” acts after and “All my Sons” on events in the Second World War in a father – son conflict.
The drama “Death of a Salesman” tells about events which happens after the second World War. Willy Loman and his son Biff are in a conflict because Willy has cheated his wife, Biff´s mother, on his business trip and Biff is very angry with his father. Willy is a dreamer and he believes in the American dream. In the part of the end in this story Biff shows Willy how much he loves him. Amazed that his son will cry for him, he decides to a suicide, so that his family get the money from the life insurance. But we don´t know how he really die.
In “All my Sons” is played after the Second World War, too. But on events that are happens during it. Joe Keller is a businessman who has soled defect airplane parts to the army in the Second World War. Because of this 21 one soldiers are dead. After the truth comes out is Chris, his son, very angry with him. After Joe Keller get a letter from his other son Lerry, who killed him self because of this mistake, Joe Keller killed him self, too. This is an other common of both storeys. Before they die, they realize the mistakes of them and that has an impact on their death. But in “All my Sons” we know that Joe Keller killed him self.
The drama “An Inspector Calls” acts about a woman with the name Eva, but she never comes out on the stage of playing. During of the engagement party of the family Birling, appear the inspector Goole and tell the people about the death of Eva. Many of the present persons have guilt in the suicide of Eva. Later the family Birling finds out, that there is no inspector Goole and nobody killed himself. But at the end of the another inspector call the family and says that a girl has committed suicide on the day and he will come by to ask some questions. In contrast to “All my Sons” and “Death of a Salesman” in this drama it isn´t clear whether Eva is really dead and no member of her family have guilt for her suicide. Here play work and love an important role in her death.
That the whole playing is very emotional and somebody die is typical for dramas.


All three dramas shows us 3 options how to get someone to suicide. In “All my Sons” it is fury. Chris is very angry at his father for his crime. In “Death of a Salesman” it is love. After Biff shows his father how much he love shim, Willy decides to kill himself. In “An Inspectors Call” it is selfishness. Everyone pushes her away, when it became uncomfortable for them. After it comes out that everything is just a fake, they are happy that they have no guilt.


The main theme common of the three plays is to take responsibility for his actions 570

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Vitalik2 hat geschrieben:Ich weiss, dass es schon einen Beitrag zu "All my Sons" gibt, aber mir geht es nicht um den Inhalt, sondern um die Rechtschreibung. Danke



Arthur Miller „All my Sons“


1) The text “All My Sons” written by Arthur Miller in 1947 is a drama which is playing? Was meinst du genau? after the Second World War. The drama is a three-act play. The story does handle / is about Joe Keller, who produces airplane parts during the Second World War. He sends a batch that he knows to the front and because of it 21 pilots die. One of his sons Larry (don´t wants doesn’t want) didn’t want to leave with it and committed suicide.(Das geschah vor dem Flug, darum hier Vergangenheit) Three and a half years, Joe could has been able to hide the truth but one day the truth comes will come out.


This text excerpt is the third act of the story and does handle about / deals with a dramatically family discussion between Chris, his mother, Ann (earlier the girlfriend of Larry and now of Chris) and his father Joe Keller (his father). The setting of the play is in the front of their house. Chris wants to leave the family and go to Cleveland. He can´t forgive the guilt of his father. Ann wants to go with him, but Chris says: No! Then Ann put out a letter from Larry. Larry has written it on the day he died. In this letter Larry explains that he can´t leave with the guilt of his father and killed / wants to kill himself. This is the moment where the story becomes more dramatic. Joe sais to Chris to get the car and go into the house for his jacket. A few moments later they have hear a shot from the house. Joe Keller has killed himself.
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2) The relationship between Chris and his father Joe, is strained because of a mistake from by Joe. Joe Keller makes a mistake that killes 21 pilots and during the Second World War. As result of that Larry, his other son, kills himself. Chris hates his father since he knows about his guilt. He is confidants confident that his father has to will be punished for this. Chris and his father are both angry with each other. Chris is angry because of the mistake of his father and Joe because his son wants to listen to him. Joe Keller tries to reconciled with his son but Chris becomes only more furious. After the suicide of Joe Keller Chris changed his mind and started to cry. This shows that he loved his father, but he was too angry to admit it. 137




3) The problem is that Kate trying tries to mediate between his son Chris and his husband Joe but they are too angry with each other. She tries to stop him and doesn´t want that he goes to Cleveland because of a / the problem with his father. Then she tries to hold Chris from Ann to give him a letter from Larry, that he has written on his day of death, to Chris and he could so that Chris can read it. After that she tries to stop Joe from reading the letter, because she fears the his reaction of him. Now she tries to calm Joe and says to him that he has two sons. But this makes it only worse and Joe answers that the other 21 soldiers are his sons, too. The other thing that worries Kate´s is that Chris wants to brings bring Joe to prison and Joe wouldn´t survive it. The part of Kate in Joe´s guilt is that she fails by trying to submit? between Chris and Joe. 164




4)Ann speaks and operates in this text in the least, but she makes the most important think thing for the other events. She gives a letter from Larry that he has written on his day of death. After Joe read this letter, he accepts his guilt.




5) “All my Sons”, “Death of a Salesman” and “An Inspector Calls” are dramas. “All my Sons” and “Death of a Salesman” are family dramas, while “Call of a Salesman” is a social drama. “Death of a Salesman” acts after and “All my Sons” on events in the Second World War in a father – son conflict.
The drama “Death of a Salesman” tells about events which happen after the Second World War. Willy Loman and his son Biff are in a conflict because Willy has cheated his wife, Biff´s mother, on his business trip and Biff is very angry with his father. Willy is a dreamer and he believes in the American dream. In the part of the end in this story Biff shows Willy how much he loves him. Amazed that his son will cry for him, he decides to a suicide, so that his family get the money from the life insurance. But we don´t know how he really died.
In “All my Sons” is played after the Second World War, too. But on events that are happens happening during it. Joe Keller is a businessman who has sold sells defect airplane parts to the army in the Second World War. Because of this 21 one soldiers are dead die. After the truth comes out is Chris, his son, is very angry with him. After Joe Keller gets a letter from his other son Lerry, who killed himself because of this mistake, Joe Keller killes himself, too. This is another common action of both stories. Before they die, they realized the mistakes of themselves and that has an impact on their death. But in “All my Sons” we know that Joe Keller killed / kills himself.
The drama “An Inspector Calls” acts about a woman with the name Eva, but she never comes out on the stage of playing. During of the engagement party of the family Birling family, appears the inspector Goole appears and tells the people about the death of Eva. Many of the present persons have guilt in the suicide of Eva. Later the family Birling family finds out, that there is no inspector Goole and nobody killed himself. But at the end of the another inspector calls the family and says that a girl has committed suicide on the that day and he will come by to ask some questions. In contrast to “All my Sons” and “Death of a Salesman” in this drama it isn´t clear whether Eva is really dead and no member of her family has guilt for her suicide. Here play work and love play an important role in her death.
That the whole playing is very emotional and somebody dies is typical for dramas.


All three dramas shows us 3 options how to get someone to suicide. In “All my Sons” it is fury. Chris is very angry at his father for his crime. In “Death of a Salesman” it is love. After Biff shows his father how much he loves him, Willy decides to kill himself. In “An Inspector Call” it is selfishness. Everyone pushes her away, when it became uncomfortable for them. After it comes out that everything is just a fake, they are happy that they have no guilt.


The main theme common of the three plays is to take responsibility for his actions 570