Please check it out and support me

[GhostWriter1888]

Hello thats my first step for an application to the Emirates Group.
Can you take a few minutes and help me out. I know there are many wrong phrases, may anybody has some useful tips for me.

The Emirates Group is currently the fifth important airline world wide and in the next 15 year they will be expanding global-economic. Additionally it would a great honor for me to work for His Highness sheikh Ahmed Bin Saeed Al-Maktoum in a professional, innovation-oriented and a airline with excellent prestige. An important consideration that decided me to work for the Emirates Airline is the postgraduate training in their own college, which specialize for all the different area of activity to deepen one's knowledge.

mfg

GW

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hello, that's my first step for an application to the Emirates Group.
Could you spare a few minutes and help me out (bekommen wir auch ein PLEASE?). I know there are many wrong phrases, maybe somebody has some useful tips for me.

The Emirates Group currently is the fifth important airline worldwide and in the next 15 years they will be expanding both globally and economically. Additionally it would a great honor for me to work for His Highness Sheikh Ahmed Bin Saeed Al-Maktoum in a professional, innovation-oriented (hier fehlt etwas, du hast Adjektive aber keinen Bezug) and an airline with excellent prestige. An important fact that made me decide to work for the Emirates Airline is the postgraduate training in their own college, which focusses on all the different areas of activity to deepen one's knowledge.

mfg

GW

[GhostWriter1888]

Vielen vielen vielen dank Keswick!
Entschuldige für den Doppelpost. Nun kann ich mit der Anaslyse beginnen.
Dabei kann ich nur mit dem Kopf schütteln wie grotten schlecht ich bin.