ich heiße Michelle und mir wurde euer Forum von einer Freundin empfohlen, die euch sehr gelobt hat. Nun ja wir müssen ein Essay in Englisch abgeben und ich wollte diesen mal hier einstellen und hoffe auf nützliche Verbesserungstipps über Grammatik und Rechtschreibung!
Danke schonmal an alle die mir dabei helfen.....
Grüß euch,michi
A road trip
It was the first weekend of summer and the Christmas holidays, and we were excited. Four good friends on their first road trip into the outback!
No parents for a week! It was just my best friend Donovan (the star rugby player), Dani (his nice but princess-like girlfriend), Ruby (my girlfriend and the school's cleverest girl) and me, Angelo. I've always been quite the worry wart, and I wasn't sure this road trip was the best idea. Two guys and two girls- was this going to work in the outback? But it was summer, school was over, so I didn't care. I should have. Four friends left together on that Sunday, and four friends returned to Sydney a week later. But not the same four people...
Me and my friends were on a trip from Sydney to Adelaide. After a very bad night in Sydney, where I didn't slept well, I started to pack my bag at seven
o' clock. After a good breakfast with my friends we packed our car, which we have lent by a car renter. So the long way to Adelaide started. On the trip we told us scary and funny histories and joke. It's a good thing to drive away the bordon, because the landscape in very hopeless and boring.
In a deserted area suddenly our car made bad noises. First we didn't worry
about that, because there was much stones, which jumped against the car. But suddenly there was a big bang. We couldn't gave more gas. So we looked under the hood to the problem. After three hours they have still not found a solution. Nous we had to decide whether we wait for a helper, or even seek a settlement or city. After a long discussion to search we decided to search for activity and went immediately to the path. After a long walk, we saw a green piece in the desolate landscape. We were looking there for help. But suddenly we heard a strange noise. There were people, but no normal people, there were Aboriginals. Both we and the Aboriginals were surprised. They have not seen many white people. But they were very nice to use and immediately took care of us and gave us something to eat. We were there for five days and got to the Aboriginals who live in and with nature. After the fifth day they took us then to a busy route. The passing wasn't easy, but we have learned a lot. Many people have thought that we would have died. Already worry newspapers had articles written about us the ,,Missing“. According to our returning all asked us how we had survived. Then we said only: The Aboriginals have helped us to survive.
When we got home we saw the world differently than before. They must necessarily and protect. So we decide to write a book about our experience. The title is:,,Survive in the wildness“. In this book we have written down all our experiences and started that the nature of the people is the most important.
