Ich heiße Max und bin neu hier. Ich muss bis nächste Woche einen Diary (Tagebucheintrag) bei meinem Lehrer abgeben und muss gestehen nicht ganz so kreativ im schreiben zu sein. Was mir derzeit aber größte Sorgen macht ist, ob ich die Grammatik und Satzstellung richtig gemacht habe.
Vielleicht kann mir ja jemand von euch einen Tipp geben, was ich noch verbessern könnte. Danke schonmal für jede Hilfestellung!!!
The last fishing session was the craziest session of my life. I was on my favorite lake to catch some beautiful carps. At first I built up my tent, than I thought about my taktic to catch some fish. I threw out my rods with the boat and feed the carps with some boilies (boilies=baits).
Back at the place I cooked a coffee and lay down to relax and enjoy the nature. At ten o´clock I had the first run on my left rod. Five minutes later I´d catched the first carp with 12 pounds. At two o´clock a friend came to me while I slept. He visited me, because he is a also a angler and we have got the same preferences. We love fishing, camping and of course carps. It was a clear night and fog was over the water. At seven o´clock I woke up, because my bitealarm was screaming. I sensed that is a big carp probably the biggest of my life. But seconds later he cutted the line and swam away. My fancy was very bad, I thought the carp was more powerful than me and I tryed it again. An hour later I could hold the next carp in my arms, exactly 26 pounds. After that I cooked a coffee and sit down on my chair. At nine o´clock I catched the third carp of that session with 20 pounds. At half past nine I catched an old friend named Joe. His weight was 18 pounds. I catched him the third time this year. Five minutes to twelve, the last carp bites. He weighted 22 pounds. At one o´clock my mother came to bring me home. It was the beautiful session of my live. I´m glad to go fishing the next week and hope it will be great. I know that fishing is not everbodys favourite sport but for me it is the greatest hobby. More than a hobby- a passion. In the last years I've got collected many experiences. You need these experiences to get better and better. So I will go on.
Yours,