About me (hilfe)

[nessy-01]

Hey!

Ich muss mir für meine Aufnahmeprüfung, ein paar Texte zusammenstellen, unter anderem "About me".
Ich habe jetzt einen mit 12 Sätzen geschrieben, da ich aber keinerlei Ahnung habe, ob alles stimmt, bräuchte ich eure hilfe.
Ich danke euch schon jetzt, da es mir echt wichtig ist.
Lg. nessy


About me


I´m a sixteen year old girl.
My name is (name einsetzen ).
Friends call me (spitzname).
I was born in (Ort), but my parent´s come from (Ort).
There we have a holiday house.
I live in an apartment house in (Wohnort), there I live with my parent´s.
There I live since six years.
I have a dog, her name is (name) and a cat, with (name) as name.
In my free time I like to go shopping or to go cinema with my friends.
Sometimes I help in the restaurant from the friends of my parents.
That´s funny and i become a little bit of pocket money.
I will to go in this school, because that´s a god chance to find a job in the futur.

[Assistenzlehrer]

I´m a sixteen-year-old girl. manschreibt die Kombination year-old mit BindestrichMy name is (name einsetzen ).Myfriends call me (Spitzname). I was born in (Ort), but my parentscome from (Ort). Du nimmst‘nur besitzanzeigendExample:This is Lisa’s room.There we have a holiday house.
I live in an apartment house in (Wohnort),whereI live with my parents.s.oI livetheresincesix years.Du musst “for” nehmen, weil es sich um einen Zeitraum handelt.
I have a dog, her name is (name) and a cather name is(name)Wenn du einen Kater hast kannst du “tom” nehmenIn my free time I like to go shopping or to go cinema with my friends.
Isometimeshelp in the restaurantofmyfriends parents’s.Hier ist es besitzanzeigendThat´s funny and ibecomegeta little bit of pocket money.Achtung “false friend” to become= werden, bekommen= to getIwill to go inwould like to attendthis school, because this is a god chance to find a job in the futur.

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hallo Beide!
Da gehe ich eben noch mal drüber, OK?!

I'm a sixteen-year-old girl.
My name is (name einsetzen ).
Friends call me (Spitzname). I was born in (Ort), but my parents come/are from (Ort).
We still have a holiday home there.
My parents and I live in an apartment house in (Wohnort)
We have been living there for six years.
I have a dog and a cat, their names are (names)
In my free time I like going shopping or to the cinema with my friends.
I have some friends whose parents own a restaurant. I sometimes help out there, which is a lot of fun.
On top of that, I earn a little extra money.
I would like to attend this school, because it will certainly help me to find a job in the future.

Grüße
Duckduck

[nessy-01]

Ich danke euch allen sehr.
Danke danke danke danke XD