Could you correct this text, please?

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Chloe

Could you correct this text, please?

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Hello all,

could you give me a hand again, please?

" The first news that I heard when I came to L. two weeks ago was the bringing into use new buses. The new buses are more comfortable, a bit bigger, but not as beautiful and authentic as the old ones. The new buses from China will not convey the atmosphere as it did the yellow ones. I hope the L. would let ( leave?) some old buses at least in the capital of the country."

Thank you!

With best wishes,

Chloe

Delfino

Re: Could you correct this text, please?

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Chloe hat geschrieben:"When I came to L. two weeks ago the first news I heard was about the introduction of new buses (for public trasport / by TFL).
These new buses are more comfortable, a bit bigger, but unfortunately not as beautiful and authentic as the old ones.
They are produced in China and will not convey the same atmosphere as their yellow predecessors.
I hope TFL will keep some of the old buses in use, at least in the capital of the country."

Chloe

Re: Could you correct this text, please?

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Thank you, Delfino!!!! :P