A day at school

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A day at school

Last winter my parents decided to spend more money for my education and enrolled me at a private school. The school's name is: Seattle Private High School and it is located in down town Seattle, which is great, because of lots of leisure possibilities after school. Some days I love my new school, some days I hate it, I guess thats quiet normal for a teenager. Most of my teachers are actually nice and try to teach us something for life, as far as this is possible having to fulfill the requirements of a very tight curriculum. We work mostly in project units meaning approach and elaborate a theme from various sides. According to my english language teacher I still show difficulties in my writing skills. He said that it is not smooth.
I think I am more a practical person, I enjoy working with my hands and love seeing a finished product in front of me. More important than all the academic things are that I have met some nice friends at my new school. They all come from different backgrounds which have one thing in common, money, because this school is expensive. Two more years for me here and after that a big question mark, but we will see what the future brings.
"Always stay positive", thats what my dad says.

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Hallo allerseits, bin neu hier und wuerde mich ueber Verbesserungsvorschlaege meines Essays freuen. Sahra
Hier ein erster Versuch:

A day at school/ A school dayLast winter my parents decided to spend more money for my education and enrolled me at a private school. The school's name is: Seattle Private High School and it is located in down town Seattle, which is great, becausethere arelots of leisuretime activitiesafter school. SometimesI love my new school,but at other times I hate it, I guess that this is quiet normal for a teenager. Mostof my teachers are actually nice and try to teach us something for life, as far as this is possible having to fulfilthe requirements of a very tight curriculumas far as this is possible. Weusuallywork in project units meaning approach and elaborate a theme from various sides. According to myEnglish language teacher I stil lhavedifficulties in my writing skills. He said that it is not smooth? running smoothly? Ithink I am more a practical person; I enjoy working with my hands and love seeing a finished product in front of me. More important than all the academic thingsisthat I have met some nice friends at my new school. They all come from differentbackgrounds but have one thing in common, money, because this school is expensive. Two more years for me here and after that a big question mark, but we will see what the future brings.
"Always stay positive!"Thatiswhat my dad says.

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[Delfino]

A day at school/ A school day Last winter my parents decided to spend more money on my education and enrolled me at a private school.
The school's name is: Seattle Private High School and it is located in down town Seattle, which is great, because there arelots of leisuretime activities after school.
Sometimes I love my new school, but at other timesI hate it, I guess that this isquiet normal for a teenager.
Most of my teachers are actually nice and try to teach us something for life,as far as this is possible, having to fulfilthe requirements of a very tight curriculum.
Weusuallywork in project units meaning approach and elaborate a theme from various sides.

According to my English language teacher I still have difficulties in writing (English). According to my English language teacher I need to improve my writing skills.According to my English language teacher my difficulties lie in my writing skills.
He said that it lacks fluency.
He said that it is not fluent / smooth.

I think, I am more of a practical person; I enjoy working with my hands and love seeing a finished product in front of me.
More important than all the academic things is that I have met some nice friends at my new school.
Although they all have different backgrounds, they have one thing in common: money, because this school is quite expensive.
Two more years for me here, but what I'll do afterwards remains a big question mark.
(So) we will see what the future brings / holds (for me).
"Always stay positive!" At least that is what my dad says / tells me.

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