Scooter - Essay [Dringend]

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Creepz

Scooter - Essay [Dringend]

Beitrag von Creepz »

Guten Tag Community :)

Wäre sehr nett wenn ihr hier mal drüber schauen könntet.
Danke im Vorraus :)

My Scooter

My only way to be mobile and not to spend my entire pocket money for the bus or train is ride my scooter.
The purchase price of the scooter and the fuel is much cheaper than a car.
With the right equipment I'm still flexible even in the winter when it's snowing and slippery.
But a huge disadvantage is that I only be ably to transport things which I carry with me like a backpack and got only one case which is for my helmet.
Also a huge disadvantage is that a scooter only can fit two people.
But the hugest disadvantage is the safety. If you have an accident with your scooter you are much less protected than in a car.
Your only protection will be your helmet and maybe a motorcycle jacket and pants.
Also your scooter will be completely destroyed if a car hits it hard.
At the moment the scooter is perfect for my own requirements.
As a student I only got a few Euros in the month which I need to buy clothes and things like this.
I won't spend the most of my pocket money for bus- or traintickets.

mfG

joy

Re: Scooter - Essay [Dringend]

Beitrag von joy »

Creepz hat geschrieben:Guten Tag Community :)

Wäre sehr nett wenn ihr hier mal drüber schauen könntet.
Danke im Vorraus :)

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ascooter and the fuel is much cheaper thanofa car.
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But the hugest disadvantage is the safety. If you have an accident with your scooter you are much less protected than in a car.
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suit.
Also your scooter will be completely destroyed if a car hits it hard.
At the moment the scooter is the ideal vehicle for my own requirements.As a studentI only get a few Euros a month which I need to buy clothes and things like this.
I won't
/ will notspend the most of my pocket money for bus- or train fares.