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[kiro55]

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The person I would like to introduce is Nora, one of the characters from the story "Seedfolks" by Paul Fleischmann.

Nora is a young Britisch nurse. She is the nurse of the old man Mr. Myles , who is sitting in a wheelchair.
Unfortunately he can't speak, because he lost his speech with his second stroke. Nora often takes Mr. Myles out for a walk and try to get
a taste of fresh air. Mr. Myles likes to watching gardener, who planted gardens, when he is outside. it's always smells like soill, whick of
course he mays the smell. It ensures , that nora to take stop for remained several minutes to smell the soil.
As nora knows that Mr. Myles likes gardening, she bought a dozen seed packers. Both plant the seed, but Mr. Myles only chose
the flowers crucial and he was proud of his work. Thus, Nora and Mr. Myles have a commo behavior.

The neighborhoods Mr. Myles like him. They often ask to Nora about his health, when the neighborhoods don't hear everything about him. Nora's relationship to Mr. Myles is very
important, because he is kind of father, she gives the chance to live great for his last life. Mr. Myles is by this way very happy to waste time for his hobby gardening with Nora.


Ich bedanke mich schon mal im vorraus.

[Delfino]

Könntet ihr mir freundlicherweise helfen diesen Text zu verbessern.

The person I will describe is Nora, one of the characters in the story "Seedfolks" by Paul Fleischmann.
Nora is a young British nurse. She takes care of the old Mr. Myles, who sits in a wheelchair.
Unfortunately he cannot speak anymore, because he lost this ability with his second stroke.
Nora often takes Mr. Myles out for a walk and thereby tries to provides him with enough fresh air.
When Mr. Myles is outside he likes to watch the gardener, who works on the planting of the garden.
So it often smells like soil, a smell he might like.
Nora ensures to stop for several minutes to (allow Mr. Myles to) smell the soil.
She knows that Mr. Myles likes gardening, so she bought a dozen packs of seed.
They plant the seeds together.
Although Mr. Myles only chose the flowers which is a crucial part.
So he is proud of his work.
Thus, Nora and Mr. Myles have some common interests.

The people in Mr. Myles' neighborhood like him too.
They often ask Nora about his health, when they didn't hear anything about him for a while.
Mr. Myles is some kind of a father figure for Nora while she gives him the chance to enjoy this last part of his life.
So their friendship is very important for them.
Mr. Myles is very happy to spend time on his hobby, which is gardening, with Nora.


Ich bedanke mich schon einmal im Vorraus.

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