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LoR - alles richtig? bitte um Korrektur :)

Beitrag von Lilly13 »

Hey! Habe diesen LoR von meinen ehemaligen arbeitgebern bekommen, da sie auch deutsche sind, wüsste ich gerne ob alles hundertprozentig korrekt ist? nicht dass sich kleine fehler eingeschlichen haben und meine zukünftigen arbeitgeber sich wundern... Ich hoffe es kann mir jemand weiterhelfen! :)



I am pleased to write a Leter of Rcommendation for Y X, born on xxth of August xyz. From xx to xx she completed an internship on our Guestfarm “abc” and proofed herself to have a good loyalty, to be very responsible and hard working and performed her duties highly satisfactorily.



During her internship she was concerned with all kinds of guest farm operations, as such are to process the booking inquiries, the check-in and check-out of guests, serving breakfast and dinner, attending to guests and cleaning and maintaining the guest accommodation.

Furthermore Miss X was in charge of the horse riding which is offered to our guests.

Her daily duties also included the care and training of our farm animals such as horses, sheep working dogs, Damara sheep and chicken. On top of that she helped us with all kinds of farm work e.g. preparing an infromation sheet for the guest or painting signs.



Miss X did all the above mentioned tasks in a highly responsible manner and our guests enjoyed her competent and friendly personality very much.

After a very short training period Miss X was fully capable of her responsibilities. In doing this she was very committed and was characterized by her outstanding prepardness.

Under increased pressure Miss X worked circumspect and efficient. We got to know her as a honest, reliable, determined and independent practicing very good team worker, who completed all projects to our utmost satisfaction. Her natural kind of humour and personality made it a great pleasure to have her as a part of our team.



It is because of all these reasons that I propose high recommendations for Y X. If you have any questions concerning this recommendation do not hesitate to contact my any time!



Sincerely

joy

Re: LoR - alles richtig? bitte um Korrektur :)

Beitrag von joy »

Lilly13 hat geschrieben: Hey! Habe diesen LoR von meinen ehemaligen Arbeitgebern bekommen, da sie auch Deutsche sind, wüsste ich gerne ob alles hundertprozentig korrekt ist? nicht dass sich kleine Fehler eingeschlichen haben und meine zukünftigen Arbeitgeber sich wundern... Ich hoffe es kann mir jemand weiterhelfen! Recommendation for YX
Dear Sir or Madam (Oder mit Name, falls bekannt)

I am pleased to recommendation Y X, born on xxth of August (für was? for employment with your organisation?). From xx to xx she completed an internship at our Guestfarm “abc” and proved herself to be loyal, very responsible and hard-working. She performed her duties highly satisfactory.

During her internship she was concerned with all kinds of guest farm operations,
such as processing the booking inquiries, the check-in and check-out of guests, serving breakfast and dinner, attending the guests and cleaning and maintaining the guest accommodations.

Furthermore Miss X was in charge of the horse riding which is offered
to our guests.

Her daily duties also included the care and training of our farm animals such as horses, sheep working dogs, Damara sheep and chicken
s. On top of that she helped us with all kinds of farm work e.g. preparing an information sheets for the guests or painting signs.

Miss X did all the above mentioned tasks in a highly responsible manner and our guests enjoyed her competent and friendly personality very much.

After a very short training period Miss X was fully capable of
doing her assigned tasks. In doing this she was very committed and was characterized by her outstanding preparedness / willingness to help / work.

Under increased pressure Miss X worked circumspect
ly/ carefully and efficiently. We got to know her as an honest, reliable, determined and independent practicing very good team worker, who completed all projects to our utmost satisfaction. Her natural kind of humour and personality made it a great pleasure to have her as a part of our team.



It is because of all these reasons that I propose high
ly recommendations for Y X for employment?. If you have any questions concerning this recommendation do not hesitate to contact me at any time!



Sincerely