Bin sehr unsicher in der Grammatik und würde mich über eine Berichtigung freuen.
Muss für meine Abiprüfung lernen und stehe auf dem schlauch
Comment 1 Genetic engineering
The science of indirectly manipulating an organism's genes using the techniques like molecular cloning and transformation to alter the structure and nature of genes is called genetic engineering. Genetic engineering can bring about a great amount of transformations in the characteristics of an organism by the manipulation of DNA, which is like the code inscribed in every cell determining how it functions. Like any other science, genetic engineering also has pros and cons. Let us look at some of them.
First of all i think that genetic Engineering can help people to learn many facts about diseases and their prognosis.Take for example Cancer.
Because of many years of research it is possible to cure cancer.
In addition genetic engineering can saves lives.
Today it is possible to breed Organs for ill people, for example Kidney or joints.
Moreover genetic engeneering can help
to avoid environmental disasters.
his is due to with the oil spill 2010 in the gulf of mexico.
The science breeded a genetically engineered bacteria which have destroyed the oil.
On the other hand genetic engineering is ethically not acceptable.
The people play god and have no respect for the nature and creatures.
Another point is that arbitrary genetic can produce misshapen organisms.
Futhermore Gene therapy in human beings can manifest certain side effects.
While treating one defect, the therapy may lead to another.
As one cell is responsible for many characteristics, the isolation of the cells responsible for a single trait is indeed difficult.
Finally genetic engineering can hamper the diversity in human beings.
Cloning can be detrimental to individuality.
Moreover, such processes may not be affordable for the masses, thus making gene therapy, an impossibility for the common man.
To sum up we can say that genetic engineering can help people, but the question is whether it is our task to play god and change the things.
I think you should take a look at the different situation if it is useful or not.
Comment 2 Role Model
Is it good thing to have a role model?
True role models are those who possess the qualities and that we would like to have and those who affected us in a way that makes us want to be better people.
To advocate for ourselves and our goals and take leadership on the issues that we believe in.
Role models could also negatively affect the personal development of an individual.
For example, if children have the wrong attitude to convey moral or aggression behavior.
Therefore, the question arises whether it is good to have a role model or not.
Useful to begin by saying that there are many points for and against role models and that there is always an individual matter itself, insofar as it adopts the practices and implement.
First can a child develop accordingly with a good role model.
If a mother is a good example for her child and always be friendly and helpful to other people
The child will take the same behave.
Secondly, role models can show a clear guideline, which one can orient themselves.
For instance, could ambition and determination, as well as help in the role model, a good education and thus a good job and lots of money and recognition.
So it would be beneficial for development.
Another point is that role models can young people make even stronger and more confident. Especially for shy young people with little self-awareness, a model can help to make young people more moral because it is itself a very self-confident, strong person, perhaps.
Moreover role models can help young people to find hobbies. Young people who now worship a footballer ', may find the courage to go even play football. As hobbies are very important for the development of a youth, it is quite positive role models to have.
On the other hand, bad role models also have a bad development to follow.
young people can also have criminal idols, such as the great example of a boy is a madman, because he got a rampage attention, might be just what the boy wants too, and then it can of course, come so far that the boy is planning a killing spree and it also performs worst.
Further a problem to note is that the imitation of certain models may lead to the young people have no individuality, because they attach themselves too much of their idol. Example, you can not develop their own style, as they copy their idol.
Finally, the most important contra-argument is that it can happen that the young people in inaccessible and fall especially unrealistic dreams. Imagine her life before as well as that of her idol. Your life will be unrealistic, they only dream to live like this as their model, neglect important things, such as school, social contacts, or family. In the end, when they realize that they have a probably unattainable dream, they are disappointed and feel bad.
In conclusion, it is clear that role models and idols have many negative and positive sides. In my view, for some it is bad to have a role model because they would lose their own individuality in the eyes, on the other hand, it is good as the models would help them to gain more confidence and they would thus be more confident. My own attitude to it is that it is normal for young people to have role models. On the role models they can orient themselves in many attitudes, but you should watch out not to want to be so very much like his idol, but also his own life, reality, and especially the fact that his own man, keep in mind.
Ich danke euch schonmal im vorraus für eure Hilfe
