Could you help me to correct this email, please?!

[Chloe]

Hello all!

It would be very nice if you could help me to correct the email to my godchild. She is a small girl and can't write yet, but I get letters from her mother. It's pretty difficult to write to somebody you have never seen. I hope my letters are not too boring.



"Dear R.,

How are you? I hope you and your family are good.

I’m fine. Next week is my last week at college and in two weeks I’m going to L. where I’ll do my internship at a big company that produces plastic toys. L. is a small island in the R. Sea. It’ll be very warm there during my stay, but I hope not too hot. I’m very pale and I sunburn very easily.

Your mother wrote to me that you liked to play with your friends. What kind of play do you like? I sent you a ball and a doll. I hope you’ll like playing with it. When I was a small girl, I preferred dolls to balls. I had a doll with a blond hair and blue eyes and I was very happy to have it.

I remember to build a small house for my doll. Unfortunately I’m the only child and I played a lot on my own. But sometimes I went outside and played with my friends.

Do you like singing? I am not good at it and I’m a little shy to sing among people. But I do it on my own, especially when I’m sad or just in a bad mood.

I’m sorry, but I have to go now. Next week I’m doing three tests and I have to learn a lot.



Hope to hear from you again.



Take care,

C."



Best wishes,



Chloe

[Delfino]

Hello all!
It would be very nice if you could help me to correct the email to my godchild.
She is a small girl and can't write yet, but I get letters from her mother.
It's pretty difficult to write to somebody you have never seen.
I hope my letters are not too boring.


"Dear R.,

How are you? I hope you and your family are well.

I’m fine. Next week is my last week at college. A week later I’m going to L. where I’ll do my internship at a big company that produces plastic toys.
L. is a small island in the R. Sea. It’ll be very warm there during my stay, but I hope not too hot. I’m very pale and therefore I sunburn very easily.

Your mother wrote me that you liked to play with your friends. What kind of games do you like? I sent you a ball and a doll. I hope you’ll enjoy playing with them.
When I was a small girl, I preferred dolls to balls. I had a doll with blond hair and blue eyes and I was very happy to have it.

I remember building a small house for my doll. Unfortunately I’m an only child. So I played a lot on my own. But sometimes I went outside and played with my friends.

Do you like singing? I am not good at it and I’m a little shy to sing among people. Although sometimes I'm singing on my own, especially when I’m sad or just in a bad mood.

I’m sorry, but I have to go now. But I have to learn a lot for my three tests next week.

I hope to hear from you again.

Take care,

C."


Best wishes,
Chloe