Hallo alle zusammen!
Wir haben letztens einen Text in der Schule über Kalifornien geschrieben und ich wollte jetzt wissen ob der Text so in Ordnung ist.
Why should tourists go to California?
Tourists should go to California because there are many attractions, lots of National Parks and two of the most famoust cities in the United States of America and the world!
In San Francisco you can see the famous Golden Gate Bridge. There is the Gateway to the Pacific Ocean and you can watch the see lions at Fisherman's Wharf. But you can also take a ride on a cable car up the city's steep hills or you can visit one of the most famous prison in the world: the prison island of Alcatrat.
In the largest city in California and the second-largest in the USA, Los Angeles, you can see many stars in front of wonderful locations. See thr stars on the Walk of Fame and meet other fans like you. If you have luck, you will maybe discovered by a star. In Hollywood is everything possible.
You like it more natural? No Problem! In California there are many National Parks as well. In Sequoia NP you can see the world's largest trees. The biggest of them is the General Sherman Tree. But the National Parks Death Valley and Yosemite and Point Reyes National Seahorse are beautifil as well.
You have fear that there are too much eathquakes and that you could die? You mustn't have fear. A simple code can save you life: Drop down under a table, cover your eyes and hold onto something.
Come and visit California!
Vielen Dank schon mal im Vorhaus.
Lg
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Caliju hat geschrieben:Hallo alle zusammen!
Wir haben letztens einen Text in der Schule über Kalifornien geschrieben und ich wollte jetzt wissen ob der Text so in Ordnung ist.
Why should tourists go to California?
Tourists should go to California because there are many attractions, lots of national parks and two of the most famous cities in the United States of America and the world!
In San Francisco, for example, you can see the famous Golden Gate Bridge. There is the Gateway to the Pacific Ocean and you can watch the sea lions at Fisherman's Wharf. But you can also take a ride up the city's steep hills on a cable car or you can visit one of the most famous prisons in the world: the prison island of Alcatraz.Or take Los Angeles, the largest city in California and the second-largest in the USA. Los Angelesis famous for its Walk of Fame where you can see many stone stars in front of wonderful locations. Perhaps you would even meet fans of your favourite stars there. And if you have luck, you might be discovered by a star. In Hollywood is everything possible.You like it more natural? No Problem! In California there are many national parks as well. In Sequoia National Park you can see the world's largest trees. The biggest of them is the General Sherman Tree. But also the Death Valley National Parks and Yosemite and Point Reyes National Seahorse are worth a visit.Are you afraid that you could die in an earthquake?Don’t worry, a simple code can save your life: Drop down under a table, cover your eyes and hold onto something.Come and visit California!
Vielen Dank schon mal im Vorhaus.
Lg
