Korrektur simple present

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Cakravarti

Korrektur simple present

Beitrag von Cakravarti »

Hallo liebe Gemeinde.

Wir nehmen in der Schule gerade Simple Present durch, ich bin also noch am Anfang der Grammatik.
Darüber schreiben wir auch bald eine Arbeit und ich würde nun gerne einige Sätze und Fragen + Antworten aufschreiben und würde mich freuen, wenn mal jemand drüberguckt. Das Thema lautet "about my day"

I get up at 6 o' Clock. Then i go to the bathroom and have a shower.
I clean my teeth and comb my hairs.
I never have breakfast, so i usually listen to music until 7 o' Clock.
I go to school at half past seven.
I have lunch at 12 o' Clock. Mostly sandwiches and a soft drink.
I leave the school at half past two and get home at quarter past three.
I usually go to bed late, often later as 2 o' Clock.
At weekend i always ride my horse or meet my friends.

Fragen und Antworten:

What time do yo get up?
I get up at 6 o' Clock.

What do you do at first?
I have a shower, clean my teeth and comb my hairs. (oder muß man dann "take a shower" sagen?)

Do you have breakfast?
No, i don't.

How do you go to school?
I go to school by bus.

When do you have lunch?
I have my lunch at 12 o' Clock.

What do you have for lunch?
I mostly have sandwiches and a soft drink.

Do you go to bed late?
Yes, i do.

What do you do at weekend?
I always ride my horse or meet my friends.


He gets up at 6 o' Clock. Then he goes to the bathroom and has a shower.
He cleans his teeth and combs his hairs.
He never has breakfast, so i usually listens to music until 7 o' Clock.
He goes to school at half past seven.
He has lunch at 12 o' Clock. Mostly sandwiches and a soft drink.
He leaves the school at half past two and gets home at quarter past three.
He usually goes to bed late, often later as 2 o' Clock.
At weekend he always rides his horse or meets his friends.


What time does he get up?
He gets up at 6 o' Clock.

What does he do at first?
He has a shower, cleans his teeth and combs his hairs. (oder muß man dann "takes a shower" sagen?)

Does he have breakfast?
No, he doesn't.

How does he go to school?
I goes to school by bus.

When does he have lunch?
He has lunch at 12 o' Clock.

What does he have for lunch?
He mostly has sandwiches and a soft drink.

Does he go to bed late?
Yes, he does.

What does he do at weekend?
He always rides his horse or meets his friends.


Das war es erstmal. Was kann ich noch verbessern?

Keswick (Contributor)

Re: Korrektur simple present

Beitrag von Keswick (Contributor) »

Cakravarti hat geschrieben:Hallo liebe Gemeinde.

Wir nehmen in der Schule gerade Simple Present durch, ich bin also noch am Anfang der Grammatik.
Darüber schreiben wir auch bald eine Arbeit und ich würde nun gerne einige Sätze und Fragen + Antworten aufschreiben und würde mich freuen, wenn mal jemand drüberguckt. Das Thema lautet "about my day"

I get up at 6 o' clock. Then I go to the bathroom and take a shower.
I clean my teeth and comb my hair.
I never have breakfast, so I usually listen to music until 7 o' clock.
I go to school at half past seven.
I have lunch at 12 o' clock. Normally sandwiches and a soft drink.
I leave the school at half past two and get home at quarter past three.
I usually go to bed late, often later than 2 o' clock.
At weekend I always ride my horse or meet my friends.

Fragen und Antworten:

What time do yo get up?
I get up at 6 o' clock.

What do you do at first?
I take a shower, clean my teeth and comb my hair. (oder muß man dann "take a shower" sagen?)
Kannst du beides sagen, ABER: "have" wird eigentlich nur dann benutzt wenn du gerade duscht oder gerade auf dem Weg in die Dusche bist.

Do you have breakfast?
No, I don't.

How do you go to school?
I go to school by bus.

When do you have lunch?
I have my lunch at 12 o' clock.

What do you have for lunch?
I normally have sandwiches and a soft drink.

Do you go to bed late?
Yes, I do.

What do you do at weekend?
I always ride my horse or meet my friends.


He gets up at 6 o' clock. Then he goes to the bathroom and takes a shower.
He cleans his teeth and combs his hair.
He never has breakfast, so he usually listens to music until 7 o' clock.
He goes to school at half past seven.
He has lunch at 12 o' clock. Normally sandwiches and a soft drink.
He leaves the school at half past two and gets home at quarter past three.
He usually goes to bed late, often later than 2 o' clock.
At weekend he always rides his horse or meets his friends.


What time does he get up?
He gets up at 6 o' clock.

What does he do at first?
He takes a shower, cleans his teeth and combs his hair. (oder muß man dann "takes a shower" sagen?) siehe oben

Does he have breakfast?
No, he doesn't.

How does he go to school?
He goes to school by bus.

When does he have lunch?
He has lunch at 12 o' clock.

What does he have for lunch?
He normally has sandwiches and a soft drink.

Does he go to bed late?
Yes, he does.

What does he do at weekend?
He always rides his horse or meets his friends.


Das war es erstmal. Was kann ich noch verbessern?

Cakravarti

Re: Korrektur simple present

Beitrag von Cakravarti »

Vielen dank für die Korrektur, das mit dem großen "I" gewöhne ich mir wohl nie an :D

Ich habe nochmal eine Frage, denn ich komme oft durcheinander bei has/have und zb. get/gets

Wenn ich sage "He gets up" und "He has breakfast at..." verstehe ich das.
Bei den Fragen komme ich aber durcheinander.
"What time does he have breakfast? - He has breakfast at..."
"What time does he get up? - He gets up at ..."

Verstehe ich das richtig, daß die Verben bei den Fragen immer normal bleiben?

Duckduck (Contributor)

Re: Korrektur simple present

Beitrag von Duckduck (Contributor) »

Cakravarti hat geschrieben:Vielen dank für die Korrektur, das mit dem großen "I" gewöhne ich mir wohl nie an :D

Ich habe nochmal eine Frage, denn ich komme oft durcheinander bei has/have und zb. get/gets

Wenn ich sage "He gets up" und "He has breakfast at..." verstehe ich das.
Bei den Fragen komme ich aber durcheinander.
"What time does he have breakfast? - He has breakfast at..."
"What time does he get up? - He gets up at ..."

Verstehe ich das richtig, daß die Verben bei den Fragen immer normal bleiben?
Hi Cakravarti,

nun, Du hast bei dieser Art der Frage das "s", welches in der 3. Person Singular (he, she, it) an das Prädikat gehängt werden muss, sozusagen schon in der Form "does" erledigt.

Wenn Du Dir die Frage mal Wort für Wort ins Deutsche übersetzt, bekommst Du heraus:

"Was Zeit tut er aufstehen?"
"Was Zeit tut er frühstücken?"
Abgesehen davon, dass diese Konstruktion im Deutschen schauerlich klingt, haben wir das Vollverb auch im Infinitiv (Grundform, also ohne irgendeine grammatische Endung dran) stehen, nicht?

Die Form von "do" brauchst Du aber nur bei der Frage und der Verneinung.
Im Aussagesatz hängst Du das "s" direkt an das Prädikat des Satzes.

Aussage: He drinks milk.
Frage: Does he drink milk?
Verneinung: He doesn't drink milk.

Grüße
Duckduck

P.S.

Anmerkung zur Originalaufgabe:

"at the weekend" dafür aber "what does he do at first?"