Wie ist der Satz richtig?
He is smoking his pipe and is reading a book
He is smoking his pipe and reads a book
Verlaufsform
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Delfino
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Kubs
Re: Verlaufsform
Dankeschön^^ Ich hab Aufgaben gemacht, bei der ich auswählen sollte ob ich die Verlaufsform oder die normale Form benutzen muss. Kann die bitte jemand kontrollieren? Wäre super nett =)
Where is your father? He is sitting in the dining-room. He is smoking his pipe while he is reading the evening paper. And what does your mother do? She is standing in the garden. She is chatting with the neighbours. She goes into the garden every evening and always chats with the people next door. Are they talking abour us now? They are talking about Tom. Mother is telling the neighbours about her son: " He leaves the house at half past six every morning. He usually runs to the station. He often looses his things. He never cleans his shoes. He always takes his fathers`s cuff links and razor blades." Where is Tom now? He is standing next to his car. He is going to see his girlfriend. Look at Tom. What does he do? He is inspecting his car. The engine isn`t running. What does Tom holding in his hands? He is holding a spanner. He is taking out the filter of the carburettor at the moment. A nut is falling out. Now he is looking for the nut. But he cannot find it. Listen, he is swearing now. Suddeny he shuts the bonnet, then he is taking his tolls, leaving his car and runs into the house. Finally he is coming out of the houise again- and takes his bicycle.
Where is your father? He is sitting in the dining-room. He is smoking his pipe while he is reading the evening paper. And what does your mother do? She is standing in the garden. She is chatting with the neighbours. She goes into the garden every evening and always chats with the people next door. Are they talking abour us now? They are talking about Tom. Mother is telling the neighbours about her son: " He leaves the house at half past six every morning. He usually runs to the station. He often looses his things. He never cleans his shoes. He always takes his fathers`s cuff links and razor blades." Where is Tom now? He is standing next to his car. He is going to see his girlfriend. Look at Tom. What does he do? He is inspecting his car. The engine isn`t running. What does Tom holding in his hands? He is holding a spanner. He is taking out the filter of the carburettor at the moment. A nut is falling out. Now he is looking for the nut. But he cannot find it. Listen, he is swearing now. Suddeny he shuts the bonnet, then he is taking his tolls, leaving his car and runs into the house. Finally he is coming out of the houise again- and takes his bicycle.
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franzi
Re: Verlaufsform
Hi Kubs.
Die Profikorrigierer werden sich sicher deines Falls noch annehmen.
Ich les hier eifrig mit um mich selbst zu verbessern.
Der Satz: "What does Tom holding in his hand?" scheint mir auf jeden Fall verbesserungsbedürftig.
Entweder: What is Tom holding in his hand?
Oder: What holds Tom in his hand?
Aber does und holding zusammen geht nicht.
Ich hoffe meine Korrektur findet Gnade vor den Augen der Experten.
Manfred
Die Profikorrigierer werden sich sicher deines Falls noch annehmen.
Ich les hier eifrig mit um mich selbst zu verbessern.
Der Satz: "What does Tom holding in his hand?" scheint mir auf jeden Fall verbesserungsbedürftig.
Entweder: What is Tom holding in his hand?
Oder: What holds Tom in his hand?
Aber does und holding zusammen geht nicht.
Ich hoffe meine Korrektur findet Gnade vor den Augen der Experten.
Manfred
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Duckduck (Contributor)
Re: Verlaufsform
Grüßigste Grüßefranzi hat geschrieben:Hi Kubs.
Die Profikorrigierer (höhöhöhö)werden sich sicher deines Falls noch annehmen.
Ich les hier eifrig mit um mich selbst zu verbessern.
Der Satz: "What does Tom holding in his hand?" scheint mir auf jeden Fall verbesserungsbedürftig. Sehr wahr!
Entweder: What is Tom holding in his hand?
Oder: What does Tom hold in his hand?
Aber does und holding zusammen geht nicht. Geeeenau!
Ich hoffe meine Korrektur findet Gnade vor den Augen der Experten.Oh Du mein Manfred, Du findest immer Gnade, aber ein Teil Deiner Verbesserung leider nicht. Da hast Du vor lauter Schreck die Form von "do" vergessen!
Manfred
Duckduck
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franzi
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Kubs