One day in Vancouver

[vato89]

Hello, i have written a short and simple text about a Vancouver trip. I describe what I would make if I had the chance, to meet Vancouver for one day.

Vancouver is locate on the West Coast in Canada. I hope the wether is good when I come there. Because the wether in Vancouver isn't always good. The reason why I love Vancover is I often compare Vancouver with Hollywood. But I also love the landscape surround the City. The mountins make me calm and happy.
Since I was 14 I wanted to go Canada. I was very curious to saw Vancouver. I think the people in Vancouver are all friendly. I heared 48 percent of the inhabitants don't speak English. That is very funny.
If I would went to Vancouver I will climbing in the Mountins. I would meet film stars and visit "The Christ Church Cathedral".

Vancouver I will see you.

Bitte nicht so viel am Ausdruck verbessern sondern eher auf die "Richtigen Fehler" schauen. Da es für mich vor allem um den Schulischen Aspekt geht.

Danke schon mal.

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hello, I have written a short and simple text about a Vancouver trip. I describe what I would do if I had the chance to visit Vancouver for one day.

Vancouver is located on the west coast of Canada. I hope the weather will be good when I go there. Because the weather in Vancouver is not always good. The reason why I love Vancouver is that I often compare it with Hollywood. But I also love the landscape surrounding the city. The mountains make me calm and happy.
Since I was 14 I have wanted to go to Canada. I am very curious to see Vancouver. I think the people in Vancouver are all friendly. I have heard that 48 percent of the inhabitants do not speak English. That is very funny.
If I would went to Vancouver, I would go climbing in the mountains. I would meet film stars and visit "The Christ Church Cathedral".

Vancouver, I will see you.

Bitte nicht so viel am Ausdruck verbessern sondern eher auf die "richtigen Fehler" schauen. Da es für mich vor allem um den schulischen Aspekt geht.

Na vato, eigentlich hätte ich Dir das Ganze zurückgeben sollen, um es erstmal selber auf Fehler zu untersuchen, findest Du nicht? Also da sind ja echt viele Flüchtigkeiten drin, die nervig zu korrigieren sind! Nächstes Mal achtest Du selbst drauf, uns einen durchgesehenen Text zu posten, OK?!
Ausdruck habe ich - wie genwünscht - nicht verbessert, obwohl es da so ein, zwei Stellen durchaus gegeben hätte...

Grüße
Duckduck

[vato89]

Danke für die Korrektur, und nächstes mal achte ich darauf.