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Do the crusades interfere with the relationship between Christian and Muslims today?

Have an event which take place about 1000 years ago a big meaning to the connection between the Islamic and Christian people? In my opinion not, because there are a lot of more current things which overshadow the cohabitant.

In my eyes the crusades were one of the most needless events in history and a really good example for the devil, in design of the church, which is unserviceable and overrated. Because of this war the doors between these two cultures closed forever and the Orient loosed its pioneer role. The proud Muslims have good reasons to see the intolerant Christian as enemies, even today. But I think that the most of them do not make such a big deal because of the crusades, they see it all most as the beginning of the oppression. Furthermore we have a lot of more new events which show us that the west do not learn something since that time. Today we just call it different and damage the Orient in other ways.

In the 20 Century behaviours from J. W. Bush as example catapult the Muslims in the Middle Ages and the constantly hectoring of the Europeans in theirs politic do not make our reputation there better.
The Islamic world has a lot of arguments to isolate itself from the westerly civilization. The crusades as an explanation for the antipathy against us is just an excuse ourselves, because we do not want to open our eyes and realize that we derogate in the last 100 years the Orient even more than the crusades did. Finally it is easier to blame an event which take place so much time ago as to accept own mistakes. The west break down as a role model, the Muslims have every right to see us critically. Of course they are some Muslims who think positive about the Europeans, with these they just show us that they do nit loose all of they tolerance.

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Ich weiß, dass ich unglaublichen Mist geschrieben habe, jedoch geht es (leider Gottes) nicht besser.
Ich hoffe hier erbarmt sich jemand und korrigiert das Desaster

[Delfino]

Does the result of the crusades interfere with the relationship between Christians and Muslims today?

Can an event which took place about 1000 years ago have a big impact on the current relation of the Christian and Muslim people?
No, in my opinion there are a lot more current things which overshadow the cohabitant.

In my eyes the crusades were one of the most pointless events in history and a really good example for the incredibly irresponsible machinations of the men leading the church.
Their behaviour shows that some people act like the devil in disguise and a naive trust in their competence was out of place.
Because of that war the doors between these two cultures might be closed forever and the Orient lost its pioneer role.
Even today, the proud Muslims have good reasons to see the intolerant Christians as their enemies. (Wie tolerant sind eigentlich die islamischen Führer heutzutage?
Please remember the caricatures which resulted in death threats, burning Danish flags, calling for boycott of Danish products, ...)
I think that most of them do not care a lot about the crusades. They probably see it all as the beginning of the oppression by ... (vermeide es deine Ansichten auf Andere zu übertragen)
Furthermore, there are a lot of more recent events which show us that the Christians did not learn anything since then.
Today we just call it something else and damage the Orient in other ways.

In the 20th century J. W. Bush's actions for example catapulted the Iraq back into the Middle Ages. (Die Muslime sind eine Religionsgemeinschaft, die wesentlich größeren Einfluß hat als das Gebiet des Golfkriegs.)
The constant hectoring of western politicians in their politics does not improve our reputation either. (Vorsicht mit indirekten Verallgemeinerungen! Nicht alle Europäer sind Christen.)
The Islamic world has a lot of arguments to isolate itself from the western civilizations.
Using the crusades as an explanation for the antipathy against us is just a short-sighted excuse.
Politicians do not want to open their eyes to realize that in the Orient the image of the western world was harmed more in the last 100 years than during the crusades.
(Woher weißt du das? Was weißt du wirklich über die internationalen Beziehungen in dieser Zeit und die komplexen historischen Abläufe im Orient?)
Finally it is easier to blame an event which took place such a long time ago than to accept one's own mistakes.
So the Muslims have every right to see us critically, because the west cannot expect to be seen as a role model.
Of course they are some Muslims who think positively about the European Christians.
They show us that not all Muslims lost their ability to tolerate people with a different belief system.

You mix the Christians, the Europeans, the Americans, the western civilisations etc. These terms are not interchangable!

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