Bitte um Korrektur der Sätze aus meinem Refferat.

[Anna 7]

Hallo,
Würde mal jemand für mich über folgende Sätze schauen? Dankeschön

1976: Douglas Kingsford opened a new aviation museum*. There were many big flying machines. 46.000 people visited the big hall in the first year. The name was: the Cornwall airportpark.

1978: The museum changed the name in Flambards Park.

The museum from time to time became an amusent park.

1999: Joint winner of ´Best theme Park in Britain´award

2011: One2Eleven indoor play opens early summer.

[Anna 7]

Außerdem komme ich nicht ganz klar mit diesem Satz: Das Flugzeugmuseum gibt es immer noch. Ginge da the aviation museum is also?

[Delfino]

1976: Douglas Kingsford founded a new aviation museum on the southern outskirts of the town of Helston in Cornwall, United Kingdom.
Its name was: the Cornwall Aircraft Park. There were many big flying machines. 76.000 people visited the big hall in the first year.

1978: The museum's name was changed to Flambards Park. The family-owned museum became an amusement park step by step.

1999: Joint winner of the ´Best Theme Park in Britain´award.

2011: One2eleven is a new soft indoor play area which is going to be opened in early summer.

http://www.flambards.co.uk/history

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Flambards_Experience