Bitte um Korrektur es geht um Werbung - DANKE -

[BAM]

Hallo,
wie angedroht ein kleiner Aufsatz zum korrigieren. Es soll diesmal um Werbung gehen. Wenn ihr sagt man könnte ihn um ein zwei sätze kürzen bin ich nicht böse.Bei dem Schlussteil bin ich mir nicht sicher wie ich das schreiben soll!! Was kann man denn sagen "aber das schlimmste ist"?? Bin echt froh das ich das Forum gefunden habe. Dann viel Spaß bei korrigieren. Und ganz wichtig ein ganz dickes Dankeschön an alle die dabei mithelfen!!!




Advantages and Disadvantages about advertisement

Advertising is a communication whose purpose is to inform potential customers about various products and services and how to obtain and use them. Advertising is a multi-billion dollar business and its messages are conveyed to the farthest places on Earth. It uses every major medium to deliver these messages including television, movies, newspapers, radio, magazines, video games, the internet and billboards. Advertisements are used to sell products. Businesses advertise their products to potential consumers with the hope that they will buy these products. They use the well known formula “AIDA” to create adverts. “A” – attention, “I” – interest, “D” – desire, “A” – action. In my opinion is one of the best known advantages of advertisements is their ability to raise awareness among the people about consumer products, varied opportunities and more. The advertisement offers also a wide range of jobs all over the world. Advertisement causes a bigger demant of goods, too. But on the other side we have disadvantages too. First the advertising interrupts broadcast and that is annoying. It manipulates the consumer and it persuades you to buy a certain product. Jetzt möcht ich noch sagen das es das schlimmste ist Flugblätter zu verbreiten da diese zur Umweltverschmutzung beitragen. leads to pollution by posing leaflets??




Grüße BAM

[Catman]

Hi,

Schreibe meinen Kommentar mal in den Text.

Advantages and Disadvantages about advertisement

Advertising is a [kind of/sort of] communication whose purpose is to inform potential customers about various products and services and how to obtain and use them. [naja eher nicht zum informieren sondern zum beeinflussen]
Advertising is a multi-billion dollar business and its messages are conveyed to the far[th]est places on Earth. It uses every major [mass] medium to deliver these messages including television, movies, newspapers, radio, magazines, video games, the internet and billboards. Advertisements are used to sell products. Businesses [weiß nicht ob man business so einfach personifizieren kann] advertise their products to potential consumers with the hope that they will buy these products. They use the well known formula “AIDA” to create adverts. “A” – attention, “I” – interest, “D” – desire, “A” – action. In my opinion is one of the best known advantages of advertisements [is] their ability to raise awareness among the people about consumer products, varied opportunities and more. The advertisement offers also a wide range of jobs all over the world. Advertisement causes a bigger demant of goods, too. But on the other side we have disadvantages too.[zweimal too hintereinander ist nicht so doll] First the advertising interrupts broadcast and that is annoying. [und wodurch wird sowas finanziert?]It manipulates the consumer and it persuades you to buy a certain product. Jetzt möcht ich noch sagen das es das schlimmste ist Flugblätter zu verbreiten da diese zur Umweltverschmutzung beitragen. leads to pollution by posing leaflets??[I think flyer are the worst kind of advertisment, because they pollute the environment and waste resorces, destroy the rain forest, whatever...]

Greetz,

Andy

[BAM]

Hallo catman,

danke für deine Hinweise

Advertising is a kind of communication whose purpose is to affect potential customers about various products and services and how to obtain and use them. Advertising is a multi-billion dollar business and its messages are conveyed to the farest places on Earth. It uses every major mass medium to deliver these messages including television, movies, newspapers, radio, magazines, video games, the internet and billboards. Advertisements are used to sell products. Businesses advertise their products to potential consumers with the hope that they will buy these products. They use the well known formula “AIDA” to create adverts. “A” – attention, “I” – interest, “D” – desire, “A” – action. In my opinion is one of the best known advantages of advertisements their ability to raise awareness among the people about consumer products, varied opportunities and more. The advertisement offers also a wide range of jobs all over the world. Advertisement causes a bigger demant of goods. But on the other side we have disadvantages too. First the advertising interrupts broadcast and that is annoying. It manipulates the consumer and it persuades you to buy a certain product. I think leaflets are the worst kind of advertisment, because they pollute the environment and destroy the rain forest.

Mir fällt auch kein anderes Wort für businesses ein. Was kann man denn dafür sagen? dict.cc sagt businesses heißt Unternehmen.

Was haltet ihr davon??
Danke



Grüße BAM

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hi BAM,

wie wäre es mit

firms, companies, producers?

Grüße
Duckduck

[BAM]

Advertising is a kind of communication whose purpose is to affect potential customers about various products and services and how to obtain and use them. Advertising is a multi-billion dollar business and its messages are conveyed to the farest places on Earth. It uses every major mass medium to deliver these messages including television, movies, newspapers, radio, magazines, video games, the internet and billboards. Advertisements are used to sell products. Companies advertise their products to potential consumers with the hope that they will buy these products. They use the well known formula “AIDA” to create adverts. “A” – attention, “I” – interest, “D” – desire, “A” – action. In my opinion is one of the best known advantages of advertisements their ability to raise awareness among the people about consumer products, varied opportunities and more. The advertisement offers also a wide range of jobs all over the world. Advertisement causes a bigger demant of goods. But on the other side we have disadvantages too. First the advertising interrupts broadcast and that is annoying. It manipulates the consumer and it persuades you to buy a certain product. I think leaflets are the worst kind of advertisment, because they pollute the environment and destroy the rain forest.

[BAM]

HMM klingt auch gut. Aber ich wollte schon ein spezielleres Wort. Naja mal schauen vielleicht hat ja noch jemand eine Idee. Ich denke ich kann es so oder so schreiben. Hört sich auch gut an.

Danke @ duckduck für den Hinweis.

Grüße

Mario

[Delfino]

An advertising agency or ad agency is a service business dedicated to creating, planning and handling advertising (and sometimes other forms of promotion).

[BAM]

Also ich geh mal davon aus das es bei diesem "Aufsatz" nichts weiter zu sagen gibt , da sich keiner mehr zu Wort meldet. Ich werde ihn deshalb so übernehmen in meine Arbeit einfügen.

Danke für die Beiträge die geleistet wurden.

Schöne Grüße

Mario