bitte korrigieren! Danke!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Kaiyako]

Hallo!

Bitte könnte mir jemand diese Inhaltsangaben und/oder die beiden anderen Aufgaben hier kontrollieren.
(Wir lesen zur Zeit ein Buch im Englischunterricht und müssen zu den verschiedenen Kapiteln Aufgaben bearbeiten.)
Ich würde mich sehr freuen!
Danke im Vorraus.

lg,
Kaiyako

Chapter 7 : Bob drops out
In this chapter the three investigators drove to the logistic company Great Dediverance.
When they drove, they spoke about the black madonna.
Justus is sure that there is nothing evil about the madonna and that there must be a natural reason for the illness of José. But Peter is not really convinced.
Suddenly they realize that they were been followed.
The guys in the flashy cars behind them are the clowns.
The three investigators look at them and recognize one of them.
When they wanted to look about the numper plate, they saw that there was no number plate, but one of the clowns had a pistol.
In the next second this guy shoted.
The investigators were shocked and their car had a little damage, so they had to stop and the car with the clowns zoom off.
This is why the investigators had to take the bus.
When Bob arrived at home he went inside the darkroom.
After a few minutes he heard that someone had came into the house.
He thought it was Peter and Justus and he called their names.
But they did not answered,
because it was no one of them, it was someone other.

Chapter 3:
exercise 1: How will the story divelop?
exercise 2: Which characters do you like/not like?

exercise 1:
When the three investigators read the bad story about them in the newspaper, they were very angry.
Because of their angriness they went to the Carino Daily Post building.
When they arrived, they asked the man at the counter about the author of this article, but the man was not friendly and said he did not know the author and that the three investigators had to go.
So they went outside, they were very unlucky because they thought that the man on the counter was suspicious.
But they had no proof.
At this moment a man went inside the building, he was wearing yeans and a yellow t-shirt.
Justus throw the man a glance and then he winced.
It was one of the clowns, the one with te light crew cut.
Justus called his friends and they hidded behind a tree.
After some minutes the man came outside and get in a car.
The three investigators followed him.
He drove to an shabby street and went inside a house.
The three friends waited and waited, but he did not came out again.

exercise 2:
I like Justus because he is very inteligent and he has great ideas all the time.
I also like Peter because he is very sportive. But sometimes he is supersitious.
The next charakter I really like is Bob, because he is interested in many things and he can find out everything when he wants to know it.
I am not sure what I should think about José, on the one hand I am sorry for him, but on the other hand he is not friendly to the investigators.
But I am sure that I really do not like Mr. Pentecost, because he wants to hid something and he things he can have every art treasure he wants.
I also do not like the clowns, because they are a bad gang without scruple.
But I like Tonio and Fernanda Gonzales because they are very friendly to their neighbour José.
but I like Fernanda best, because she is very brave and selflessly.

[Delfino]

Hallo!

Bitte könnte mir jemand diese Inhaltsangaben und/oder die beiden anderen Aufgaben hier kontrollieren.
(Wir lesen zur Zeit ein Buch im Englischunterricht und müssen zu den verschiedenen Kapiteln Aufgaben bearbeiten.)

Ich würde mich sehr freuen!
Danke im Vorraus.

LG,
Kaiyako

Chapter 7 : Bob drops out
In this chapter the three investigators drove to the logistic company Great Dediverance.
While they were driving they spoke about the black madonna.
Justus was sure that there was nothing evil about the madonna and that there had to be a natural reason for the illness of José.
But Peter was not really convinced.
Suddenly they realized that they had been followed.
The guys in the flashy cars behind them were the clowns.
The three investigators looked at them and recognized one of them.
When they tried to look at the numper plate, they saw that there was none, but one of the clowns had a pistol.
In the next second this guy shot.
The investigators were shocked and because their car had been damaged, they had to stop while the car with the clowns drove off.
Therefore the investigators had to take the bus.
When Bob arrived at home he went into the darkroom.
After a few minutes he heard that someone had came into the house.
He thought it was either Peter or Justus.
So he called their names.
But nobody answered, because it was none of them.
It was someone else.

Chapter 3:
exercise 1: How will the story develop?
exercise 2: Which characters do you like/not like?

...

[Delfino]

Chapter 3:
exercise 1: How will the story develop?
exercise 2: Which characters do you like/not like?

exercise 1:
The three investigators were very angry after reading the bad story about themselves in the newspaper.
Because of their anger they went to the Carino Daily Post building.
When they arrived, they asked the man at the counter about the author of this article.
The man was not friendly and said that he did not know the author and that the three investigators had to leave.
So they went outside.
They were very unlucky and they thought that the man at the counter was acting suspicious.
But they had no proof.
At this moment they saw a man who entered the building.
He was wearing jeans and a yellow t-shirt.
Justus throw a glance at the man and then he winced.
It was one of the clowns, the one with the light crew cut.
Justus called his friends and they hid behind a tree.
After a few minutes the man came out again and got into a car.
The three investigators followed him.
He drove into a shabby street and went inside a house.
The three friends waited and waited, but he did not came out again.

exercise 2:
I like Justus because he is very intelligent and he has great ideas all the time.
I also like Peter because he is very sportive. But sometimes he is superstitious.
The next character I really like is Bob, because he is interested in many things and he can find out everything he wants to know.
I also like Tonio and Fernanda Gonzales because they are very friendly to their neighbour José.
I think I like Fernanda best, because she is very brave and selfless.

I am not sure what I think about José, on the one hand I am sorry for him, but on the other hand he is not friendly to the investigators.
But I am sure that I really do not like Mr. Pentecost, because he is hiding something and he thinks he can have every art treasure he wants.
I also do not like the clowns, because they are a bad gang without scruple.

[Kaiyako]

Hallo Delfino,

vielen, vielen Dank!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ich hab mich total über die Korrektur gefreut!:freu:

lg,
Kaiyako