Bewerbung

[Mar Yam]

Hallo
in meinen thread geht es um eine Bewerbung auf Englisch! Wollte euch um euer feedback bitten!

Dear Mr. Thomas Bauer,
As agreed with you by email I would like to apply for an internship in Philadelphia. At the moment I am studying in 5th semester “International Business Administration and foreign trade” at the University of applied sciences in Worms with English, French, Spanish and Arabic. I am convinced that these language skills and my intercultural interest are indispensable in globally positioned companies.
Along with this knowledge I guarantee a high motivation, reliability and the ability to work in teams. Before graduation I worked as an intern at the “DER Agency”. During the internship, I was taught in accordance with the training plan for a career as a travel agent, specializing in travel agency, established skills and knowledge. The knowledge which I had acquired, were in customer service, travel management and processing of customer inquiries. For the successful design of various tasks, I will naturally bring with flexibility, resilience and teamwork. I was able to put these qualities in organizing numerous events such as Commerzbank meeting in Vienna, fairs in table-service team. So I'm sure I can relieve you felt for some tasks.


Vielen lieben dank

[Delfino]

Hallo Leute,
in meinem Beitrag geht es um eine Bewerbung auf Englisch!
Ich möchte euch um euer Feedback bitten!


Dear Mr. Thomas Bauer,

I hereby apply for an internship in your company/organisation in Philadelphia
as agreed with you by email.

I am currently studying “International Business Administration and foreign trade”
at the Worms University of Applied Sciences in Germany. I am in the 5th semester
of my studies which also included language lessons in English, French, Spanish
and Arabic.

During my internship* at the “DER Agency” I gained work experience and the knowledge
needed for a career as a travel agent. The training focused on tasks in customer service,
travel management and the processing of customer inquiries.

I also organised numerous events such as the Commerzbank meeting in Vienna and
worked in the service team at several fairs. The successful completion of the tasks
assigned to me was possible due to my flexibility, resilience and most importantly
my ability to work efficiently in teams.

I know that globally active companies requiere highly motivated and reliable staff
with good language and intercultural communication skills such as mine. Therefore,
I am convinced that I could be a valuable addition to (one of) your team(s).

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

X... Y...


Vielen lieben Dank.

*apprenticeship?

relieve has a wide range of meanings (e.g. "I relieve you of your duties." => I'll take over now. or even You are fired.)


Good luck.