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PinkeGlitzerFee.

Schweres Essay- Thema, mein Text ist ein Desaster :s !

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Halli- Hallo (:

Ich soll in Englisch einen kleinen Aufsatz verfassen. Dieser soll sich mit dem Thema P.olitik und R.eligion beschäftigen. Das ist mir unglaublich schwer gefallen! Erst Mal hatte ich absolut keine Ideen und als das Thema feststand habe ich mich beim Schreiben wie ein Analphabet gefühlt :/ Ich hoffe und bitte, dass man mir hier meinen (unglaublich furchtbaren :D) Aufsatz korrigiert. Beim Schreiben hatte ich Probleme mit allem, Satzbau, Ausdruck, Zeiten ... Verzweiflung einfach.

Religion and politics in Islam.

A lot of people think, that there is no separation between religion and politics in the Islam world, but the history showed us that there is one. This two factor always have been stood in a field of tension, without that religion had control about politics. A little excurse in the political theories of Islam.

If you want to understand the relationship between politics, religion and Islam, you have to take a look at the definition of these two words first. Politics is a progress which is affected by humans. His task is it to arrange

the shared existence in society, in the community. It has a lot in common with religion. Because its aim is it to interpret the world and give life a sense. Also to adjust the behaviour of every single person and to define the order of the community. European have the opinion that in Islam the politics is subjected by the religion. But the sermons by Mohammed are just ideals, practical they have no importance any more.


The Islam clergy hover between cooperation and opposition. On the one hand the state can give them money and power, on the other hand they are afraid of loosing them’s morally authority. The state on his part tries to control religious institutions like school, mosque or the trust, because they have important capabilities.


Ich Danke schon Mal herzlichst !!
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joy

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PinkeGlitzerFee. hat geschrieben:Halli- Hallo (:

Ich soll in Englisch einen kleinen Aufsatz verfassen. Dieser soll sich mit dem Thema Politik und Religion beschäftigen. Das ist mir unglaublich schwer gefallen! Erst Mal hatte ich absolut keine Ideen und als das Thema feststand habe ich mich beim Schreiben wie ein Analphabet gefühlt :/ Ich hoffe und bitte, dass man mir hier meinen (unglaublich furchtbaren :D) Aufsatz korrigiert. Beim Schreiben hatte ich Probleme mit allem, Satzbau, Ausdruck, Zeiten ... Verzweiflung einfach.

Religion and politics in Islam.

A lot of people think, that there is no separation between religion and politics in the Islamic world, but the history shows us that there is one. Although these two factors always have always been stood in a field of tension, today's religion does not control political activities. Before going any further, I will take you on a brief excursion into the political theories of Islam.

If you want to understand the relationship between politics, religion and Islam, you first have to take a look at the definition of these two words "politics and religion". Politics is a progress which is affected by humans. (Nicht klar, was du sagen willst) One of its tasks is it to arrangethe distribution of resources of social existence in the community. It has a lot in common with religion, considering the aim to interpret the world and give life a sense as well as to adjust the behaviour of every single person and to define the order of the community. Europeans have the opinion that in Islam the politics is subjected by the religion. But the sermons by Mohammed are just ideals, and so practical they have no practical importance any more.

The Islamic clergy hover between cooperation and opposition. On the one hand the state can give them they can be given money and power by the state, on the other hand they are afraid of losing their morally authority. (warum die Angst? das könntest du noch etwas erläutern) The state on his part tries to control religious institutions like schools, mosques or the trusts, because they have important capabilities.
Ich Danke schon Mal herzlichst !!
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Delfino

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Europeans have the opinion that in Islam the politics is subjected by the religion.
But the sermons by Mohammed are just ideals, and so practical they have no practical importance any more.
Europeans have the opinion that in Islamic countries the politics is subjected by religion
because the political actors use the omnipresent religiously-coloured views to guide themselves.

Although the sermons of Muhammad are only religious ideals,
they therefore still have a great impact on peoples lives in those countries
and influence the views of the
Islamic population in other places too.

PinkeGlitzerFee.

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Thank you :)