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Guten Abend,

könnte jemand so nett sein und sich vielleicht mal meinen Text durchlesen und eventuell auch korrigieren :)
Wäre echt super, denn ich würde den Text morgen Nachmittag brauchen :D Vielen Dank schon im Voraus für eure Hilfe :)


What are the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet?


The Internet is a discovery of the 90s years. This is a thing with a lot of advantages, but also with disadvantages, because young people spend more and more time only with their computers at home instead to go out and meet with friends.

But for all that has the Internet also a lot of advantages. For example the people can in this day and age do their shopping easily while they are sitting at home. In addition it was also possible to make a new way for education. Distance learning. I think that this education option wouldn´t exist without Internet. There are even forums where people can discuss about a lot of topics.

On the other hand is it really bad that people are evermore unsocial, if they only spend their whole time with surfing in the Internet. There are even enough people, which have problems to have contact with other persons. Moreover is it also very poor for the eyes, if they are looking always on the monitor.

To sum up there are both advantages and disadvantages with the Internet. I think there are a lot of advantages, but the people shouldn´t overact with the using of the Internet.


Ich wünsche euch allen noch einen schönen Abend!
Cornel

joy

Re: Bitte Text ansehen :)

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Cornel hat geschrieben:Guten Abend,

könnte jemand so nett sein und sich vielleicht mal meinen Text durchlesen und eventuell auch korrigieren :)
Wäre echt super, denn ich würde den Text morgen Nachmittag brauchen :D Vielen Dank schon im Voraus für eure Hilfe :)


What are the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet?


The Internet is a discovery of the 90s years. This is a thing with a lot of advantages, but also with disadvantages, because young people spend more and more time only with their computers at home instead of going out and meeting with friends.

But for all that has the Internet has also a lot of advantages. In this day and age for example the people can in this day and age do their shopping easily while they are sitting at home. In addition the Internet made it possible to provide education in a new way for education. Distance learning. I think that this education option wouldn´t exist without Internet. There are even forums where people can discuss about a variety of topics.

On the other hand is it really bad that people are evermore unsocial, as they only spend their whole time with surfing in the Internet. There are even enough people, who have problems to set up contact with other persons. Moreover is it is also very harmful for the eyes, if they are always looking always at the monitor.

To sum up there are both advantages and disadvantages with the Internet. I think there are a lot of advantages, but the people shouldn´t overact with the using of the Internet.


Ich wünsche euch allen noch einen schönen Abend!
Cornel
Danke, ebenfalls.

Cornel

Re: Bitte Text ansehen :)

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Vielen Dank für die Korrektur :) Hätte ich gar nicht geglaubt, dass ich so wenig Fehler gemacht habe :D

Ich wünsche dir noch einen schönen Tag,
Cornel