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[Volli_007]

Hallo es wäre nett wenn ihr den Text überprüfen könntet:

In my opinion people caught by spraying grafiti shouldn't be punished because grafiti is nothing criminal and it looks nice because it is a kind of art. The youth found something to spend their time in sprying grafiti than that is better than violent. The young people being punished there should be founded some places where they can do it legally. For example is a old house, the young people can make it beautifuller.

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hallo, es wäre nett, wenn ihr den Text überprüfen könntet:

Hi Volli und willkommen im Forum!

In my opinion, people caught in spraying graffiti shouldn't be punished, because graffitis are not criminal and they  looks nice, because they are a kind of art. After all, the young people have found something to spend their time with that is better than violence. Instead of punishing the young people, places should be founded where they can do it legally. For example, if there is an old house, the young people can make it more beautiful.

Na, da ist ja schon noch die ein oder andere grammatische Schwäche, was?
Mein Tipp: dranbleiben!

Grüße
Duckduck