Könnte jm. mal bitte über die Bewerbung gucken danke !

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Jerome

Könnte jm. mal bitte über die Bewerbung gucken danke !

Beitrag von Jerome »

Dear Sir or Madam
I read your ad in the newspaper of 20 march and i would like to apply for a job as a junior camp leader. As you will see from the attatched CV, I had two practical as a junior camp leader, and i think that these experience are helping me while i do my job in youre carry. I am very good at getting along with children, and it´s fun. I speak English, German and a little bit of French. These languages will help me to contact with children who come from another country.

I would be grateful for the chance to meet you at an interview and look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Jerome Starch


Bedanke mich im voraus schon mal :o

Delfino

Re: Könnte jm. mal bitte über die Bewerbung gucken danke !

Beitrag von Delfino »

Jerome hat geschrieben:Dear Sir or Madam,
I read your ad in the [name of newspaper] newspaper of 20 March and
I
would like to apply for the position of Junior Camp Leader.

(Last year) I've already worked twice as junior camp leader at [name of organisation],
because I truly enjoy working with children. I am convinced
that the experience I've gained will enable me to carry out my job.

As you can see in my attached CV, I speak English, German and a little bit of French.
My language skills will definately help me to communicate effectively with children
from other countries.

I would be grateful for the chance to meet you for an interview
and therefore I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Jerome Starch

Keswick (Contributor)

Re: Könnte jm. mal bitte über die Bewerbung gucken danke !

Beitrag von Keswick (Contributor) »

Delfino hat geschrieben:
Jerome hat geschrieben:Dear Sir or Madam,
I read your ad in the [name of newspaper] newspaper of 20 March and
I
would like to apply for the position as Junior Camp Leader.

(Last year) I've already worked twice as junior camp leader at [name of organisation],
because I truly enjoy working with children. I am convinced
that the experience I've gained will enable me to carry out the job.

As you can see in my attached CV, I speak English, German and a little bit of French.
My language skills will definately help me to communicate effectively with children
from other countries.

I would be grateful for the chance to meet you for an interview
and therefore I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Jerome Starch



Nur 2 kleine Kleinigkeiten ;) .

Duckduck (Contributor)

Re: Könnte jm. mal bitte über die Bewerbung gucken danke !

Beitrag von Duckduck (Contributor) »

Keswick hat geschrieben:
Delfino hat geschrieben:Dear Sir or Madam,
I read your ad in the [name of newspaper] newspaper of 20 March and
I
would like to apply for the position as Junior Camp Leader.

(Last year) I (have) already worked twice as junior camp leader at [name of organisation],
because I truly enjoy working with children. I am convinced
that the experience I have gained will enable me to carry out the job.

As you can see in my attached CV, I speak English, German and a little (bit of) French.
My language skills will definitely help me to communicate effectively with children
from other countries.

I would be grateful for the chance to meet you for an interview
and therefore I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Jerome Starch



Nur 2 kleine Kleinigkeiten ;) .
Ich auch noch ein paar Kleinigkeiten!