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Hallo:D

Ich möchte mich sprachlich verbessern. Ich habe Texte geschrieben und ich hoffe dass da nicht zu viele fehler sind.
Ich wäre sehr froh wenn ihr mir helfen und den Text korrigieren könntet. Damit ich aus meinen Fehlern lerne.

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Authoritarian parenting style

The Children of authoritarian parents have to follow the orders. They can not make their own dicisions. This parenting style mediates some kind of safety. But it is based on reward and punishment not on communication and comprehension. If the educator away, the children will not act autonomously.
Communication between the educator and the children is not provided. There are no reasons about why an act is required. The classic statement is: “You have to do what I say.”If the children questioning authority or when they are disobedient will they punished. Constant control of educators is an important element of the authoritarian parenting style.Lacking self-confidence and lacking independence can be the results. This result can be intensified when the parents not encourage heir children to independence and curiosity.Critics say that this parenting style has not the goal of a modern education. These goals are an
independently acting personality. Today hard punishment is not wanted.
The Social psychologist Kurt Lewin notes that rebellion against the educator and lacking social behaviour are the effects of the authoritarian parenting style.An authoritarian personality should be the result. Such a personality shows traits that contain anti-democratic and fascist behaviours.

Anti- authoritarian parenting style

The Goal of the Anti- authoritarian parenting style is to educate the children without any force. It is the opposite of the repressive traditional education. It is build up in the sixties of the past century.
The goal of this parenting style is to encourage the development of the children to self-confident and creative personalities. The self-development should not repress. The basic idea is that the self-development should not restrict. The Children need free-space to develop creativity and curiosity. So they can determine values and rules themselves. The parenting style is against every authority even in the education or in political systems. It is influenced of education reformers and of alternative and psychoanalytic theories. Critics say that the children are overextended, because they must discover the social rules themselves.
Unlike the spread opinion of the term “authoritarian” it is not easy to make the children what you want. Participation is an important element of the education. The bad image of this parenting style may be caused by parents who misunderstood this kind of education. They educate their children without any rules. It is speculate that the bad image is caused by traditional educators who have specifically defamed the Anti- authoritarian parenting style. The educators want a better image. They found new words like “emancipatory” or “not- authoritarian”.

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Das mit der korektur hat sich schon erledigt. Das macht schon mein Nachhilfelehrer.