Kurzer Text (kleine Biografie)

[Hansi]

Hi, ist das so in Ordnung oder sind da große "peinliche" Fehler enthalten.



My Name is xx xyz.
I was born in xyz xx xyz.
During my Schooltime I lived in a small Village near to xx called xx.
Schooltime I finished with beeing graduated with the German Abitur.
In the following 9 Month I worked as a social worker for the xx xx
Without any Idear which career might had been the right for myself, I went to xx to start study economics science.
This I gave over because of several personally reasons.
My brothers girlfriend is decending from an old Seeman Family. She gave the first impressions to me what it means to work at the Sea as a nautical Officer.
Because of her narratives I was fascinated by this job and I decided to start my career as a Seaman with becomming a trainee as nautical Officer Assistent.
During my 13 Month onboard Time I stood on three different Container Vessels which are all sailing under German Flag.


danke im Voraus
gruss Hansi

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hi, ist das so in Ordnung oder sind da große "peinliche" Fehler enthalten.



My name is xx .
I was born in xx .
During my school time I lived in a small village near to xx called xx.
Schooltime I gratuated from school, after the German Abitur (the equivalent of British A-levels).
In the following 9 months I worked as a social worker for the xx xx
Without any idea of which career might be the right one for me, I went to xx and started studying Economic Science.
I, however, gave up for personal reasons.  
My brother's girlfriend is decending from an old sailor family. She taught me what it means to work as a Nautical Officer at sea.
Because of her stories I became fascinated with this profession and I decided to start my career as a sailor by becoming a trainee as Nautical Officer Assistent. During my 13 months onboard (rather: at sea) the Time I stood on three different container vessels which are all sailing under German Flag.


Danke im Voraus
Gruss Hansi

Das muss ein interessanter Beruf sein .
 
Achte unbedingt auf deine Gross- und Kleinschreibung und auch auf die Rechtschreibung.
 

[Hansi]

dankeschön